The seven crows by: sparkletime90
Requested by: sparkletime90

I definitely like the concept of the different abilities and different characters. The story itself gave me the vibe of the anime The seven deadly sins which I liked.

But there is something I want to say and that is the pace of the story. The prologue definitely sets up the story well but then in chapter one we get the five year jump and no explanation on what happens to Elizabeth within those five years except for her trying to save her brother and finding the seven crows. I wished you showed Elizabeth finding the crows and figuring out how to get her brother out of prison rather than just rushing it and moving onto something else.

I get it's a action novel but I wish the book was more fleshed out and more character development between characters. Overall it has potential but I think you need to learn how to pace the story a bit better and also learn how world build a bit more too.

Thanks for requesting me.

-Traveler_lilly