💫FAN FICTION RESULTS 💫

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So finally Results time ! We congratulate all the winners and participants. You all are awesome !


A special thanks to the judges  itsanaya28  and kshamtasaini for submitting the results so soon and taking their valuable time to judge your books.

So without much delay .

              🌠  1st place 🌠

     The Prince by lukescurlsenthusiast

   
            🌠   2nd place 🌠
  
         Classmates by Radhupranu

             🌠  3rd place 🌠
 
      We were just enemies by

       AHalf-BloodPrincess

        🌠  Honourable mention 🌠

Surrendering to the dark by brhr14
  
SCORES OF THE PARTICIPANTS:

1.Manan Love and family by iamunique_30

Title :  3/5       
Blurb:  7/10       
Originality: 8/10
Cover:  4/5         
Plot:   8/10 
Characters: 9/10
Grammar: 6/10   
Vocabulary:  6/10   
writing style:8/10
Overall enjoyment:  8/10   
Attractive power: 9/10

Total: 76/100

I like the character of Manik which is quite  different from the show , and the way writer  represents bond of Naira and Manik is beautiful , chemistry is little weak between manan , Vocabulary is weak in some parts of the story but is enjoyable .

2 .Courmarine Academy : The Quest of unity SnFusion          

Title : 3/5       
Blurb: 8/10   
Originality: 8/10
Cover:4/5       
Plot: 8/10     
Characters: 8/10
Grammar:8/10       
Vocabulary: 8/10           
writing style: 9/10   
Overall enjoyment:   8/10
Attractive power: 8/10

Total: 80/100

The plot of the story is great being an imaginative story the writer beautifully maintains it originality , characters are so good specially I love the character of Ash . Writing style is also nice . Somewhere I feel enjoyment was missing .overall it's quite good.

3 :- Shipping Sales Right by Aserranoaldana

Title :3/5     
Blurb:6/10         
Originality: 8/10
Cover: 4/5       
Plot: 6/10           
Characters: 7/10
Grammar: 7/10         
Vocabulary: 7/10         
writing style: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 8/10       
Attractive power: 7/10

Total:70/100

The story is very short as it's ongoing , characters quite seems interesting . I like the way you mention about minute information to enhance its originality and I basically like the way you represent the idea of high school romance and friendship.

4 :- The lies hidden in our vows by
Namastae_SugaKookie

Title : 3/5     
Blurb: 7/10       
Originality:7/10
Cover: 4/5       
Plot: 7/10       
Characters: 7/10
Grammar: 8/10         
Vocabulary: 8/10       
writing style:7/10   
Overall enjoyment: 7/10   
Attractive power:7/10

Total: 72/100

According to me , the story is quite interesting till now as story is still ongoing , the flashback parts are really awesome , it's very emotional in some parts , grammar and vocabulary is quite good in the story . In some parts I feel the lack of attraction power, otherwise it's nice.

5 :-  Entangled fates (ft.Rikara) Rikara_sk

Title : 4/5     
Blurb: 7/10       
Originality:7/10
Cover:4/5         
Plot: 7/10       
Characters: 8/10
Grammar:6/10           
Vocabulary:7/10           
writing style:8/10     
Overall enjoyment: 8/10 
Attractive power:8/10

Total:74/100

The story is ongoing , I like the plot of the story specially the way writer shows the strong and independent  character of Gauri and apart from this still manages to show her fragile nature ,  there are  grammatical errors and somewhere there is a lack of attractiveness in the story .I must say , I love the confession part ,it's so beautifully written .

6 :- A Reylo Story The New Threat by AuthorQueen_49

Title : 3/5         
Blurb:7/10             
Originality:6/10
Cover:3/5         
Plot: 8/10       
Characters: 7/10
Grammar:  8/10             
Vocabulary:  8/10           
writing style:8/10           
Overall enjoyment: 7/10 
Attractive power: 6/10

Total: 71/100

I must say I like the character of Ben , I feel Originality is somewhere missing in the story and that magnetic power which bound readers to complete that story is also missing . Overall the story is nice and your punctuations is also upto to mark .

7.Mysterious past by jiminie_butterfly01

TITLE — 5
COVER —5
BLURB — 7.5
PLOT— 8
ORIGINALITY— 7.5
CHARACTERS —10
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION—8
VOCABULARY/SPELLING 8
WRITING STYLE — 9
OVERALL ENJOYMENT 9
ATTRACTIVE POWER 9
TOTAL- 86 /100

Book cover is beautiful and speaks well about the story. And the title is absolutely according to the story. Blurb is very simple and there you should add something interesting, that makes the readers keen to peep inside.  There are many Grammatical errors I found. Anupriya's first meet with Sidharth makes me feel like a series is playing in front of me. Yet I need you to work more on originality. At some instances there's a bit more description needed. Overall story is enjoyable.

8.Devotions of heart by MaisieDaisyMoo

TITLE — 3.5
COVER —4
BLURB — 8
PLOT— 8
ORIGINALITY— 9
CHARACTERS —10
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION—8
VOCABULARY/SPELLING 9
WRITING STYLE — 10
OVERALL ENJOYMENT 8
ATTRACTIVE POWER 8
TOTAL-  85.5/100

Cover is good but some improvement can be done to make it more attractive. title is amazing but a Little more description is needed. Grammar needs to be checked at some places. Overall story is good.

9. Surrendering to the dark by brhr14

TITLE — 4
COVER —4.5
BLURB — 9
PLOT— 9
ORIGINALITY— 9
CHARACTERS —8.5
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION—8.5
VOCABULARY/SPELLING 9
WRITING STYLE — 10
OVERALL ENJOYMENT 8
ATTRACTIVE POWER 8
TOTAL-  87/100

Title seems interesting and it makes me keen to read your story. Cover is really beautiful and I liked it so much! Story description is good but it would be good if you add some more to it to make it more interesting. Vocab is good but grammar needs to be checked some times. Overall story is good!

10.We were just enemies by AHalf-BloodPrincess

TITLE — 4
COVER —4
BLURB — 9.5
PLOT— 9
ORIGINALITY— 9
CHARACTERS —10
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION—8.5
VOCABULARY/SPELLING 9
WRITING STYLE — 10
OVERALL ENJOYMENT 8
ATTRACTIVE POWER 8
TOTAL-  89/100

This is the best title on the list. I liked it and it matched the story perfectly. Cover is awesome. Story description is good. Overall story is good maybe the choice of phrases can be improved.

11.Classmates by Radhupranu

TITLE — 3.5
COVER —4
BLURB — 9.5
PLOT— 9
ORIGINALITY— 9
CHARACTERS —10
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION—8.5
VOCABULARY/SPELLING 9
WRITING STYLE — 10
OVERALL ENJOYMENT 9
ATTRACTIVE POWER 9
TOTAL-  90.5/100

Title is good but it's very common and I think you should use a unique title for such a good story. I adore the cover of this book. Story is simply beautiful and I enjoyed it a lot. Character of shubhu is amazing and quite relatable when her mother wake her up early telling wrong time. Plot is not new as I've read such stories many times. Grammar and vocabulary can be improved.

12.The prince by lukescurlsenthusiast

TITLE — 3.5
COVER —4.5
BLURB — 8
PLOT— 9
ORIGINALITY— 9
CHARACTERS —10
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION—10
VOCABULARY/SPELLING 10
WRITING STYLE — 10
OVERALL ENJOYMENT 9
ATTRACTIVE POWER 10
TOTAL- 93 /100

Story is outstanding but not the title. I think this story needs a unique title. Cover is really beautiful and I liked it so much! Story description is good. The grammar is amazing! The plot is really good. Just a little more description about the characters is needed. I like the way you wrote the chapters and it was really fun while reading.
 
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