💫TEEN FICTION RESULTS 💫

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So finally Results time ! We congratulate all the winners and participants. You all are awesome !


A special thanks to the judges Adele_Onwuka and  blooddess_  for submitting the results so soon and taking their valuable time to judge your books.

So without much delay .

                 🌠   1st place 🌠

           Happiest girl in the world by
               winnie_loves_honey

 
                  🌠 2nd place 🌠

           I dare you jojobean1298
                       And
     Not like you by hchladybug1218

                 🌠   3rd place  🌠

          Mixtape laneywritesthings
 
           🌠  Honourable mention  🌠

                The moment we met by
                  IvashkovLightwood
                               And

                 James by Hazel_Cahill
  
PARTICIPANTS SCORES:

1.Can't Change The Fate by ispectacleyou


Title - 4
Cover - 3
Blurb - 6
Plot - 8
Originality - 8
Characters - 9
Grammar/Punctuation - 7
Vocabulary/Spelling - 6
Writing style - 8
Overall enjoyment - 10
Attractive power - 9

Total - 78

Review - The blurb of the story is really short and kinda bad. Try to give it details, so a reader can know what your book is all about. The cover is kinda plain and not so interesting. Try to correct the errors in your work and also correct use of grammar and punctuation shouldn't be left out. Your writing style is good, not too much description or dialogue. I actually loved your work, it's amazing. Good work.

2.James by Hazel_Cahill

Title - 5
Cover - 5
Blurb - 3
Plot - 8
Originality - 9
Characters - 9
Grammar/Punctuation - 8
Vocabulary/Spelling - 9
Writing style - 10
Overall enjoyment - 7
Attractive power - 7

Total - 80

Review - I love the cover of the book. The blurb was very short and not so good. I couldn't even get what the story was about from the blurb. Try to add somethings to it, to make it better. A blurb with interesting details make readers curious to read your work. There also weren't much errors in your work which is good. Great job.

3.The Happiest Girl in the World by winnie_loves_honey

Title - 5
Cover - 5
Blurb - 9
Plot - 10
Originality - 10
Characters - 10
Grammar/Punctuation - 10
Vocabulary/Spelling - 10
Writing style - 10
Overall enjoyment - 9
Attractive power - 9

Total - 97

Review - The title and cover of the book is fantastic. The plot is awesome, well arranged and really intriguing. I like the way the characters were portrayed in the book with different personalities. I didn't see any mistake or error in your work, that's really good. I really enjoyed your book, your writing is exceptional. Great job!

4.The Outrages After Us userabc123XYZ

Title - 4
Cover - 5
Blurb - 10
Plot - 8
Originality - 9
Characters - 9
Grammar/Punctuation - 9
Vocabulary/Spelling - 10
Writing style - 9
Overall enjoyment - 7
Attractive power - 8

Total - 79

Review - I simply love the cover, it's gorgeous. The blurb was really captivating and intriguing. The story wasn't as intriguing as I expected it to be, and that didn't spark any excitement in me. Try to add more intriguing details and events to the storyline. The grammar and punctuation usage was good, vocabulary was excellent. Your work was really good, nice job.

5.Not Like Me by hchladybug1218

Title - 4
Cover - 5
Blurb - 8
Plot - 10
Originality - 8
Characters - 9
Grammar/Punctuation - 10
Vocabulary/Spelling - 9
Writing style - 9
Overall enjoyment - 8
Attractive power - 9

Total - 89

Review - The cover of your book is absolutely beautiful. The plot of your work is awesome. So many twists, suspense, tension and intriguing events. Your book doesn't paint a good picture in mind at some scenes, but it's all good. The originality of your work is just the normal cliche teenage love triangle books that are everywhere. Try to make yours different by adding more personalities of your characters, I'm sure you can do that. I hardly saw a mistake in your work, that's really good. You made a really good effort by giving your characters distinct impacts on the story. I can honestly say I loved your book.

6.My Fascination For You by Marilyn_McKnight

Title - 4
Cover - 4
Blurb - 8
Plot - 6
Originality - 7
Characters - 6
Grammar/Punctuation - 9
Vocabulary/Spelling - 9
Writing style - 8
Overall enjoyment - 7
Attractive power - 8

Total - 76

Review - The cover of your book is nice. I really don't know how the blurb is related to the story, probably because you haven't updated much chapters of your book that gives an insight on the details of your blurb. But your blurb is really good, it holds suspense and gives a curiosity to read your book. The plot is quite not comprehendible, and some parts in the story were controversial. But maybe as the story goes on, it will be understood well. There were little to no errors in your work which is good. So far the characters haven't really made an impact on the story with their distinct personalities or thoughts. Your writing style is good too, a balanced ratio of dialogue and descriptions. Your work is good to an extent! I hope as your book goes on, it gets better.

7.The moment we met by IvashkovLightwood

Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/10
Plot: 7/10
Originality: 8/10
Characters: 8/10
Grammar: 10/10
Vocab: 8/10
Writing Style: 7/10
Overall Enjoyment: 6/10
Attractive Power: 6/10

Total: 80/100

Feedback: A good read, I must say!

8.I dare you by jojobean1298

Title: 4/5
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 10/10
Plot: 8/10
Originality: 10/10
Characters: 10/10
Grammar: 8/10
Vocab: 8/10
Writing Style: 9/10
Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
Attractive Power: 10/10

Total: 89/100

Feedback: This book is amazing, I could help but laugh like a fool! Honestly, hats off to the author, amazing writing style!

9.The Freshman Tease by Leolunah

Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 7/10
Plot: 6/10
Originality: 9/10
Characters: 7/10
Grammar: 9/10
Vocab: 9/10
Writing Style: 6/10
Overall Enjoyment: 6/10
Attractive Power: 6/10

Total: 75/100

This book started on a beautiful note. The blurb could be improved and made a bit more appealing to the readers. The cover and the title is great!

10.Veiled by ReinaLarrison

Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 10/10
Plot: 7/10
Originality: 7/10
Characters: 8/10
Grammar:9 /10
Vocab: 9/10
Writing Style: 7/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/10
Attractive Power: 5/10

Total: 77/100

This book has a strong feminist vibe to it. The women are strong characteristically and it is great. I really really like the cover.

11.You are the One for me MineForever6

Title: 3/5
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 6/10
Plot: 7/10
Originality: 7/10
Characters: 8/10
Grammar: 8/10
Vocab: 8/10
Writing Style: 7/10
Overall Enjoyment: 7/10
Attractive Power: 6/10

Total: 71/100

The title really is simple, but beautiful, although a rephrased title would have garnered more attention. The blurb could use some work, and the sentence structuring too. Potentially could be a good read.

12.Mixtape laneywritesthings

Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 7/10
Plot: 7/10
Originality: 6/10
Characters: 10/10
Grammar: 8/10
Vocab: 9/10
Writing Style: 10/10
Overall Enjoyment: 10/10
Attractive Power: 8/10

Total: 85/100

Feedback: This book is written in a very unique and different way, mostly one-liners and it makes everything just better than ever. The sarcasm and the connectivity with the protagonist is great, although I really didn't get hold of the plot. A good read!

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