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So finally Results time ! We congratulate all the winners and participants. You all are awesome !


A special thanks to the judges Arundhati777and _sweetgirl123_ for submitting the results so soon and taking their valuable time to judge your books.

So without much delay .

                🌠 1st place 🌠

      Murder and the sins that follow by
              CahiraTheEmpress

                🌠2nd place 🌠

                The huntress by FmEver

                 🌠3rd place 🌠

War Infinite: The Chosen Twelves  by
                 AngelMickaella

      🌠Honourable Mention 🌠

         What's been lost by T_A_Onkowe

SCORES OF ALL PARTICIPANTS:

1.What's Been Lost T_A_Onkowe

Title: 4/5
Cover: 3/5
Blurb:9/10
Plot: 10/10
Originality:9/10
Characters:9/10
Grammar/Punctuation:9/10
Vocabulary/Spelling:9/10
Writing style:10/10
Overall enjoyment:10/10
Attractive power:10/10

Total: 92

The cover is pretty, but it can be changed. Blurb is beautifully written, but I felt that it was a bit short. The originality of the story is something that I definitely noticed. The plot was excellent, and was at the perfect pace throughout the story. The portrayal of characters needs a bit of work, but it was good nevertheless. The grammar and vocabulary is upto the point, with only a few mistakes. Writing style is absolutely stunning, and captured my heart. Overall, it was an amazing story, and I enjoyed reading it. 

2. The Huntress FmEver

Title:4/5
Cover:3/5
Blurb:10/10
Plot:10/10
Originality:10/10
Characters:10/10
Grammar/Punctuation:10/10
Vocabulary/Spelling:10/10
Writing style:10/10
Overall enjoyment:10/10
Attractive power:10/10

Total:97/100

The first thing that I noticed, was that the cover was quite plain. That's something that needs to be changed, or the readers might not be interested. And that's something I wouldn't want to happen to such an amazing story. The blurb and plot was excellent. Characters were beautifully depicted. Superb grammar and punctuation. Your writing style is absolutely beautiful. I loved reading this story. Definitely a must read.

3. A Night to Remember by Lillian_Ambrose2601

Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 8.5/10
Plot: 8.5/10
Originality: 8/10
Characters: 8/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 8/10
Vocabulary/spelling: 8/10
Writing style: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 8/10
Attractive power: 8/10

Total: 82/100

The cover is beautiful.Title is good and fits the story perfectly. The blurb needs to be reworded, as it was a bit confusing. It needs to be shortened. The plot of the story is good, but it was confusing and very fast paced. It took some time to understand what's going on. The portrayal of the characters felt rushed to me, and that's something you need to work on. The Vocabulary was good, but some sentences needs to be reworded. There were quite a few grammatical errors throughout the story, and it can be prevented in the future by proofreading it.

4. War Infinite:The Chosen Twelves by AngelMickaella

Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 9/10
Plot: 10/10
Originality: 10/10
Characters: 10/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 8/10
Vocabulary/Spelling: 8/10
Writing style: 10/10
Overall enjoyment: 10/10
Attractive power: 10/10

Total: 95/100

Excellent title and cover. Very intriguing blurb. The story is very original, and I greatly enjoyed reading it. The characters are beautifully portrayed. However, the grammar and vocabulary needs a bit of work. There were quite a few grammatical errors. But you can rectify it by proofreading. Overall, this is a stunning story, and I'm looking forward to read the rest of the story.

5. Murder and the Sins that Follow by CahiraTheEmpress

Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 9/10
Plot:10/10
Originality: 10/10
Characters:10/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 10/10
Vocabulary/Spelling: 10/10
Writing style:10/10
Overall enjoyment: 10/10
Attractive power: 10/10

Total: 98/100

Title is very intriguing. The blurb and the plot of the story was excellent. The story was very original, and I was impressed with the concept. Excellent grammar and punctuations. Your writing style is amazing, and kept me hooked. I definitely enjoyed reading the story, and look forward to reading the sequel. But one thing that I noticed,  was that the ending seemed rushed to me. But overall,  it was an amazing story. 

6.  Strange life: Master of Happenstance
by galaxygal

Title: 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 8/10
Plot: 8/10
Originality: 9/10
Characters: 9/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 8/10
Vocabulary/Spelling: 8/10
Writing style: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
Attractive power: 9/10

Total:- 85/100

cover is absolutely beautiful, and depicts the plot perfectly. However, the title wasn't much clear. All the other images crowded over the title. My advice is to increase the size, and write it in a bright colour. Blurb was good. But I couldn't understand much, as the prequels were not provided for judging. It was a bit short. So maybe try to elongate it. Grammar and Punctuations are good. But there were a few mistakes that needs to be rectified. Overall, the story is quite captivating, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. 

7. Road by rishabh_24

Title: (3.5)
Cover: 4
Blurb: 6.5
Plot: 6
Originality: 7
Characters: 6
Grammar/punctuation: 8
Vocab/spelling: 6
Writing style: 7
Overall enjoyment: 8
Attractive power: 7


Total:69/100

Review: Some scenes could've been better if described thoroughly. The last chapter titled "Road- the ultimate truth" was beautifully written, everything you said was deep and true. The way you put her death as fate and said that the person's dies, the souls don't- I love it. Good job!

8. Corrupted Lives by -cosmicgalaxy-

Title: (4)
Cover: 4
Blurb: 2
Plot: 7
Originality: 8
Characters: 7
Grammar/punctuation: 8
Vocab: 8
Writing style: 8
Overall enjoyment: 10
Attractive power: 8


Total: 74/100

Review: The title is really good and so is the cover. Please write a better blurb, it's really short and not very interesting. The storyline is catching. 

Tip: Write shorter paragraphs, readers like it that way.

9. Idol Companion by ameliaphoenix36

Title:  (4.5)
Cover: 3.5

Blurb: 7
Plot: 6
Originality: 8
Characters: 6
Grammar/punctuation: 9
Vocab:7
Writing style: 7
Overall enjoyment: 8
Attractive power: 7


Total: 73/100

Review: I am not a big fan of fanfiction so it was hard for me to read the book. I made sure NOT to make biased opinions so dw. The cover and the title are great. Work on the blurb a bit. I really love the quotes you start your chapter with. There are some minor spelling mistakes which I hope you edit. 

10. Melancholy of heart by Ahseya_aye

Title: (4/5)
Cover: 3.5
Blurb: 5.5
Plot: 8

Originality: 8
Characters: 7
Grammar/punctuation: 8
Vocab: 7
Writing style: 8
Overall enjoyment: 10
Attractive power: 7

Total: 76/100

Review: The cover is breathtaking. The blurb is also quite beautiful. The names that you have used for the character are unique and pretty. The way it portrays depression is awesome. Good job!

11. The Vengeance of the beast JabreelWilson

Title: 3.5
Cover: 4
Blurb:9
Plot: 8
Originality:9
Characters: 8
Grammar/punctuation: 8
Vocab: 8
Writing style: 8
Overall enjoyment: 7
Attractive power: 7

Total: 79.5 /100

Review: Sometimes it's wrong to describe things cause the words you use are often not correct. Your book is just amazing. I read the WHOLE book and it had 86 chapters? Idk but it was worth reading. You are astounding writer!

12. Reagan economics by brhr14

Title: 4
Cover: 3
Blurb: 8
Plot: 7

Originality- 9
Characters: 7
Grammar/punctuation: 8
Vocab: 7
Writing style: 7
Overall enjoyment: 10
Attractive power: 7

Total: 77/100

Review: The book is well put and the title suits it well. The cover could have been better. The blurb is really long (longer than necessary) so try editing it shorter. I enjoyed it. Worth a try!

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