Review#23

Written by GemmiaClegg25
Reviewed by Lone_Wolf-

Cover:
I loved the cover but it doesn't quite suit the topic of your book and the title is a little too small, I'd suggest making it a little more bold.

Title:
Finding in Myself is a great title, it is perfect for a book such as yours where Mia, who is in depression and does drugs could finally find some happiness with her daughter.

Blurb:
Honestly, I suggest you change the blurb. You can already find out what Mia and Lincoln are going through without even reading the book. The questions you put up at the end make it intriguing though. I think a small blurb which gives up as little information as possible would be better. And I recommend you put up a tigger warning.

Grammar:
There are small spelling and grammatical mistakes in the book. I suggest you do a quick review of it.

Overall:
Mia dealing with depression and trying to get better after everything is pretty inspiring. There were many instances I thought she'd give up but she didn't and I could actually feel what she was going through. But here and there you repeated a few phrases which made reading it a little hard. The story flow is a little but slow but it is a good read.

Hopefully that was the kind of review you were looking for. ^ _ ^ ❤

Lone_Wolf-