Review#22

Written by FareezaBacchus
Reviewed by dallas1213
Aka Katherine

Chapter one:
Ok your plot is sooo good!!!!
Already I dislike Bailey and her mom for being mean and leaving Hannah!

Chapter two:
I love the relationship Hannah has with her dad:)

Chapter four:
Ok so the one thing I will suggest for chapter four is maybe don't use so may pictures and instead just use details to describe how their makeup and clothes look, allow the readers to imagine what they might look like without using a picture.

(But this is just my personal opinion, and your book is still amazing❤)

Chapter five:
I did see a few grammar mistakes but I'm confident that if you reread the chapter, you will be able to find them:)

Ps:
I'm loving your plot❤

Chapter thirteen:
Ok so when Tyler was showing and describing his tattoos to Hannah, I think you should of haded what his tattoos looked like and why he got them. (Give a little background so the readers can connect with Tyler as a main character) 

(But this is just my personal opinion, and your book is still amazing:)

Cover: 8/10
Plot: 13/15
Grammar: 6/10
Spelling: 10/10
Personal enjoyment: 8/10

Now so I read all of your book and I like it! The plot is good, and your details are good! The only thing I may suggest is you reread your book or even look into getting an editor, as I did see quite a few grammar mistakes but I'm sure if you reread your book, you will find them:)

Thank you for giving me this opportunity to review your book❤

Have a wonderful day/night❤✨

-Katherine.