Review#18

Written by Amara3271
Reviewed by SelenaJones_Vampires
Aka Lizzie

Okay this book is so exciting, funny, and entertaining. Chapter 1 has amazing detail, which lets me imagine the setting of which Annabella and Ethan are in. I love how the flashback gave me an idea of what Annabella's past was like and how she ended up in such a situation with James. The detention chapter might be my favorite because of the humor. 🤣 James is built as such a horrible character in a perfect way ( if that makes any sense).

Improvements:

Your story is so beautifully written that there aren't many improvements needed!

One improvement could be when James is abusing Annabella you could show her emotional pain instead of her physical pain. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there but other than that, you're all good!

Thanks for letting me review your book! It means so much to me!

- Selena ( @SelenaJones_Vampire )