NOTE : the FS is from the COUPLE COMPITITION TRACK ..

LOVING THE IMPERFECTIONIST -

PART 1

HAPPY READING 💖

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As soon as shiva came on the stage infront of disha and raavi cladding in three piece suit, he heard every other person present there gasped watching him at his new Avtar.

Disha : wow shiva , tum kitna handsome lag rahe ho is get up main . Main bata bhi nhi sakti ki tum kitna pyara lag rahe ho . Wow I can't imagine ki yeh tumne Mera liya Kiya hai , I mean I know yeh tumne Mera liya hi kiya hai . Tumhe dekh ker toh main flat hi ho gai hun . Arey raavi tum kyun esa khadi ho tum bhi toh kuch bolo na after all he is your ex - husband.

Dhara : wow shiva tu kitna acha lag raha hai isme haaye main wari jawan bhut Sona lag raha hai mera shiva . Meri toh tujh per se nazar hi nhi hat rahi kahin meri nazar na lag jaaye.

Gaumbi: sachi kaha dhara ne shiva tu aaj bhut handsome lag raha hai infact main toh yeh kehta hun ki yaha per baithe sabhi mardon main se sabse zada dashing aur smart lag raha hai.

Krish : haan bhai aaj toh muja yeh baat accept karni padegi ki aaj mera bhai duniya ka sabse best aur ek dum hero lag raha hai.

Dev : bhai yrr tu aaj ek dum srk jaisa lag raha hai . I just love this getup of yours.

Rishita :shiva ek dum juch rahe ho . shiva maine kaha tha na you will look the best aur dekho best se bhi zada tum hero no 1 lag rahe ho . Anyways all the best aur dev tum dekho apne bhai se kuch kaisa taiyar hote hai aur kaisa khud ko carry karte hain .

Shiva was smiling ear to ear listening all the compliments he got but he was desperately waiting for his chipkali's his Raavi's compliment , her to say something but instead of saying something she did opposite.

Raavi : battisi kya dikha raha hai haan jiska liya pehn ker aaya hai itna saj dhaj ker aaya hai usne itni tareef ji kar di hai haina toh zada khush hone ki bhi zarurat nahi hai samjha esa angrezi kapde pehn lene se kisi ki sachai nahi badal jati ki tu aaj bhi wahi shiva pandya hai jissa meri shaadi hui thi . Well main toh yeh kehti hun ki tum dono made for each other ho ek dusre ke liya perfect ho and then with heavy broken heart and mind full of if and buts soul shattered and eyes heavy with lots of painful tears she left the stage and ran as fast as she could towards pandya niwas .

Shiva and others just looked at her retreating figure. While coming out of shock he too came down and was about to leave the place but suman stopped him .

Suman : shiva kahan jaa raha hai tu haan us markundi gay ke peeche. Usse jahan jaana hai jaane de ab tu disha ke sath khel pura kar kyuki sahi maino main ab voh hi teri ardhangini banegi . Voh teri hone wali dharam patni hai toh jaa stage per aur Jeet ker aa yeh compitition.

Shiva : nahi maa muja ab koi khel nahi khelna hai na uske sath na kisi aur ke sath . Bhut ho gaya yeh khelna khilana ab Jo hoga voh sabko accept karna hoga acha ya bura mujha nhi malum chahe voh Main hun ya aap log sab ko accept karna hoga jisko na karna ho naa kare per mera samne koi bakwas ya koi tipani nhi rakhega warna mujhse bura is bhramand main koi nhi hoga . Aur disha Tum aur tumsa jude log ache se apne aankh kaam sab khol ke sun lo nah toh tum meri hone wali dharam patni ho na hi sahi ladki jo meri zindagi main ardhangini banegi aur nah hi tum meri kuch lagti ho . Tum mera liya kuch nhi ho mehj ek voh ladki jiski chah Mai meri maa pagal ho gai hai bas . Toh please maa meri apse hath jodh ker binti hai ki isse mere palle bhandhne ki galti mat karo isse kuch hasil nhi hoga kisi ko bhi iski zindagi toh barbaad hogi hi wahi meri aur raavi ki bhi ho jayegi .

Suman : toh raavi ke sath bhi toh koi bandan nhi bana hai na tera . Voh bhi toh ab kuch nhi lagti Teri .

Shiva : bandhan nhi bana hai abhi tak toh tuta bhi nhi hai koi . Bhut si esi taaren hai abhi bhi jo judi hui hai uske sath meri . Aur agar aap aur disha yeh bhul rahe ho toh yaad dila dun ki raavi abhi bhi meri dharam patni hai meri voh meri gauri hai meri zindagi main aane wali sahi ardhangini hai kyuki abhi tak mera uske sath talak hua hi nhi hai aur hoga bhi nhi main hone hi nhi dunga chahe muja mahadev ko dharti per laane ke liya tap hi kyun na karna padh jaaye .

Disha : per hone toh wala hai na shiva tum yeh kyun bhul rahe ho ki usne tumhari itni insult ki sabke samne , usne tumhe chanta mara tha aur phir bhi tum keh rahe ho ki talak nhi doge rok doge . Phir bhi tum yeh keh rahe ho ki tumhe wahi chahiya toh theek hai toh tum uske peecha jana chahte ho toh jaao main nahi rokungi .

Shiva : tum muja rok bhi nhi sakti kisi main itni himmat nhi ki voh shiva pandya ko rok sake . Aur ek baat maine tujha pehle bhi lakh baar bola tha na ki mujhse dur reh kyun teri yeh daal mera aage nahi galegi kyuki Tera is janam toh kya agle saat janmo tak koi chance nhi hai toh koi umeed mat hi rakho toh behtar hoga . Apni zindagi mera peecha barbaad mat karo aur jaao kahin aur jaaker apni zindagi dubara shuru karo . Vese bhi tujha mujhse kuch milaga toh hai nhi . Dekh akhri baar samjha raha hun aur muja cheeza ghuma phira ker baat karne ka nah toh shunk hai aur nah hi aata hai. Main yeh shadi nahi kar sakta nah main is janam na agle saat Janam tak karna chahunga . Mera aur tumhara koi Mel nhi hai. Muja koi nhi chahiya sivay ek insaan ke per philhaal meri life main pehle hi bhut tante chal rahe hain aur mera aur meri raavi ke beech main bhut si unkahi doriyan hai joh chah kar bhi sulajh nahi sakti yah main..... Kher chodo ...

Disha : shiva main sab samajh kar bhi samjhna nahi chahti . Tum chahe kitna bhi kar lo tum mujhe tumse pyar karne se nhi rok sakte . I will always love you even if you don't . Main phir bhi tumko chahungi tumko hi pyar karungi shiva .

Then shiva without any response he was about to leave but suman stops him again but shiva is shiva he gives his most heart thudding scary looks to her and others that she left his hand and he left for home in the same car he came in .

Meanwhile maami throughs mud on disha's dress and face .

Prafulla: yeh tera liya voh kya hai na meri raavi ki zindagi teri wajh se kharab ho rahi hai . Agar tu uske shiva se dur nahi rahi na toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga . Mana shiva mahakal ka Avtar hai toh main bhi yamraaj ki bhen se kam nhi . Haan yeh bhi manti hu ki main shiva ko pasand nhi karti kyuki voh Kam padha likha hai aur angrezi kapde nahi pehnta , per iska matlab yeh bhi nhi hai koi bhi era gaira aake usko meri raavi se alag kar dega . Uska talak ho ya na ho usse muja koi farak nhi padhta bas itna pata hai ki shiva sirf aur sirf meri raavi ka hai talak se pehle bhi aur talak ke baad bhi .

Undono ka sath pehle pasand nhi tha per ab nah Prafulla Jagat Narayan yeh ailan karti hai ki main dua karti hun ki meri raavi aur uska shiva ka sath itna mazboot aur ATOOT ho jaaye ki koi bhi unhe alag na kar paaye . Aur agar un dono ko sath lane ke liya mujha edhi choti ka zor bhi lagana pade ya saam daam Dand bhed Jo marzi kyun na karna pade main karungi per tujh jaisi Dayan ko mera shiva ke palle nhi bandhna dungi . Voh jaisa bhi ho mera bhanja hai mera aur uska rishta jaisa bhi ho voh humara hai toh us kayeda sa yeh rishta main kharej karti hun . Aur kaan khol ke sun le meri raavi ka pati shiva pandya tha shiva pandya hai aur shiva pandya hi rahega aur voh abhi bhi hai kyuki rishta abhi tuta nhi hai aur main tutne dungi bhi nhi .

Meri beti uski thi uski hai aur usi ki rahegi . Aur suman bhen aap apne aapko shiva ki maa kehti hain na per main kehti hun aap apne bete ke dil ki baat samajhna ya toh bhul gai hain ya samajhna chahte nahi hai is moh main ki meri beti ne use thapad kyun mara . Ek din is ladki ki bhi aukat samne toh aa hi jayegi . Aur haan ab main bhi dekhti hun kaisa aap aur yeh ladki kaisa dono bachon ko alag karte ho .

Suman : aey kangdi teri himat kaisa hui mujhse aur meri dishu se esa batameezi se baat karne ki aur uper se keechad bhi dala tu yeh theek nhi kar rahi hai Prafulla tu bhut bura bhugtegi .

Prafulla: voh esa hain na suman behn pehle mujha bhi zid thi raavi aur shiva ko alag karne ki lekin ab zid hai un dono ko milane ki ab chahe isme meri jaan hi kyun na lelo aap main shiva aur raavi ko kabhi alag nhi hone dunge . Agar meri beti shiva ko chahti hai toh usse shiva ka sath zarur milaga aur aap kuch nhi kar payengi . Aur yeh ladki haha kahan yeh aur kahan shiva , jahan shiva khula aasmaan hai na yeh uski jooti ki nok bhi nhi hai . Kahan yeh usko jhel payegi . Ek minute bhi nhi uske jawalamukhi jaisa gussa ko nhi jhel paayegi .

Uska aag jaisa gussa sab kuch bhasm kar dene ki shamta rakhta hai uss gussa ko shaant karne ki shamta sirf meri raavi rakhti hai wahi kar sakti hai shiva pandya ka gussa ko shant karne ka karya . Shiva ke ander jo bhaukal hai na usse sirf raavi uski gauri hi samajh sakti hai . Voh kab kya karta hai kyun karta hai kis liya karta hai yeh sirf raavi ko samajh aata hai . Pehle nhi aata tha manti hun per ander hi ander usko sab pata hota tha ki shiva kya karega ab bas sakpaka jati thi .

Yeh yeh .... Yeh Kon hai Suman behn haan kuch bhi nhi shiva ko handle karna koi dudh peeta bacha ka khel nhi hai . Yeh toh shiva ko raavi ke peecha jaane se bhi nhi rok pai , is compitition main bhag leke ke liya bhi nhi mana pai aur bhi baki cheezon ke liya nhi mana pai toh yeh sambhalegi shiva ko sari zindagi.

arey Aaj Tak yeh tumhari bhagodi ki beti dhara nhi sambhal paai toh yeh toh phir bhi voh kankad hai jo meri beti ka ghar todh ker apna ashiyana basana chahti hai uske aansuon per . Jo raavi kar sakti hai na suman bhen is ghar ke liya shiva ke liya is ghar ke sadasyon ke liya voh yeh nhi kar sakte.

Disha : main jaisi bhi hun apki beti se toh bhut achi hun aur yeh chehra kharab karne se kuch nhi hoga maami . Ab aap dekho maami main kaisa shiva ko apna banati hun . Ab toh voh mera hoker rahega har haal Main yeh meri zid hai . Usse raavi ko chodna hi hoga voh sirf or sirf mera hai . Aur aap jo kar lo sab fail kar dungi Main. Saying so she cleans her face with maami's saree pallu . When she was saying all this she was looking like a psychopath who is mentally ill or obsessed with someone.

Maami knows she is definitely not a right person for shiva and she is gonna protect both of them for sure .

Prafulla: huh dekhta Hain kon kya karta hai aur kon kya nahi . Abhi toh tu shiva ko janti hi kahan hai . Jis din jaan gai na us din dekhungi kya karegi tu . Us din shayad tera yeh ghatiya khokhla pyar sab hawa ho jayega . Saying so she sits on her place while disha sits beside suman and kanta with a fake smile.

Suman : shabash meri dishu tune ache jawab diya us nagin ko .

AT PANDYA NIWAS

SHIVI KE ROOM MAIN ..

Wahi dusri taraf shiva raavi ko darwaza kholne ko keh raha tha .. shiva ke kafi hat karne ke baad usne khola voh ander aaya toh dekha voh bhut ro rahi thi .

Shiva : tu kyun waha se bhag aai .. dekh jo tune waha dekha voh sach nhi tha . Meri baat toh sun le uske baad tu jo decide karegi voh main Maan lunga bina na nukur ke . Please 🥺 ek baar sun toh le ..

Raavi : kya sunu aur kyu sunu . Sunna aur sunana ko ab bacha hi kya hai . Tune Aaj Tak khud ko is tarah kabhi kisi ke liya nhi badla na dhara di ke liya , na mera liya na kisi aur ke liya phir aaj us chipku chaman ke liya kyun yeh sab kyuuuuuuu jawab de sakta hai .. nahi hai na toh Jaa yaha se mujha tujhse koi baat nhi karni bas kuch wakt ki baat hai humara talak ho jayega phir tu apna rasta main apne . She was about to go to change in night wear when shiva said ..

Shiva : jawab hai mera pass raavi . Main yeh suit tera liya pehn ker aaya tha . Main nhi janta tha ki disha waha esa hogi aur voh yeh sab karegi . Main toh teri side khada tha na . Tera sath participate Kiya tha na toh main kisi aur ke liya kyun badlu. Tujha muja esa dekh ker khushi ho isliya esa get up liya bas . Main is rishta ko ek aur mauka dena chahta hun raavi isliya efforts kar raha hun per shayad it's too late now . Shayad maine tuja kho diya hai .

Raavi : mera liya ? Kyun jab divorce de hi Raha hai apni marzi se toh ab kyun efforts kar raha hai voh bhi apna comfort zone se bhar aa ker mat kar please . Jab Tera Dil ek ghadi per aa hi gaya hai toh pari kya cheez hai so why me now usi se shadi ker na apni maa se ek baar bol bhi nhi paya ki shadi abhi tuti nhi hai aur unke kehna per shadi kar raha hai us disha pisha se then why me nowwwwwww whyyyyyyyy .

Shiva : bol diya maine maa ko ki humara rishta toota nhi hai bol diya maine . Aur tu hi bata ab agar dil us ghadi per aaya hai toh iss dil ko pari per laane ke liya kya karna hoga ? At the end he clearly flirted with her and then with a style left from the room and here raavi was shocked and when came out she with a bang again locked it .

BACK TO THE COMPITITION..

Krish : sorry sorry sorry aap sab ko sorry 😔 yaha abhi jo kuch bhi hua uske liya . Toh let's start the COMPITITION with new zeal as humare sab contest ek ek kar sab out ho gaye hai aur ab shiva aur raavi bhabhi bhi eliminate ho chuke hain toh ab dekhte hain ki baki ke couples main se kon yeh chamchmati trophy ko ghar le jayega Aaj .

After krish's announcement dev rishita and some two couples do the dance and modelling on the stage and then went back to their initial position.

Krish : wah wah sabi couple ne yeh task bhut hi shandaar tareeka sa kiya hai . Toh aaiya dekhta hai in main se konsa couple hai jo behad lucky hai jo iss sunheri couple trophy ko ghar le jayega Aaj ki shaam . Aur yeh dekhiya humare judges ne bhi apna result dediya hai . Toh somnath vasiyon apna dil tham ker baithiya ab winner announce hone jaa raha hai .. vese winner announce karne se pehle mujha yeh bataya ki aaj is compitition ko kon jeeta hsi ? Audience any guesses ?

Many hootings for the desired couple were coming from every row . So it was different task for them to choose one .

Krish : so aap sab ki utsuka dekhta hua main bata dun Aaj shaam is compitition ka winner hai ......................................................dev aur rishita bhabhi... Woho congratulations Bhai Bhabhi. Arey ek minute ek minute yeh kya yeh toh gazab jo gaya yeh toh tie hai . Iss baar ek nahi do do couples jeeta hai ..and then told the second winner of the day .

Rishita gasped at the announcement and made a tamatar jaisa face that she had to share her trophy with the couple but then she thought that if shiva and raavi were here then they would have definitely won the compitition without and draw match in between. So she thought that if they don't win then she also don't want it like this . So very wisely she went to the other couple and gave the trophy saying that they should keep it as baar Jeet toh lagi hi rehti hai aaj voh jeeta hai agle sal voh jeet jayega usse iski moh nhi hai . She then happily took the photograph with it . Dev and family were happy with her understanding but were sad for shivi .

Soon everyone went to pandya niwas and saw shiva was in aangan sitting in gloom . Watching him in gloomy sad face suman tries to make him understand that she is unworthy for him and his family but shiva being shiva is angery hearing her and make her quite.

Just then prafulla comes in light sidelines everyone even suman ..

Prafulla : aaye shiva sun meri baat dekh merko pata hai tu bhut pareshan hai bhut chinta bhi ho rahi hai tuja uski aur raavi bhi udhar pareshan hogi gussa main hogi per tu tension mat le main hun na tum dono ko khushi khushi milaungi .. tum dono ke marzi ke bina ek patta nhi hilega .. merko pata hai tu vishvas nhi kar paa Raha hai mujh per per mera ek baar ek aakhri baar vishvas kar le main iss baar tum dono ko alag karne nhi ek karne aai hun .

Tum dono ka sath pehle jaisa chahiya wahi shiva raavi jo ladhte the , jhagadte the , ek dusre ki punch khichte rehte the per ek dusre ki izzat karte the , bharosa karte the per izzat nilam nhi karte the , dhoka nhi dete the ek dusre ko sab bol dete the bhale hi gussa main ya phir ek dusre ko chidhane ke liya per bolte toh sach hi the na ek dusre se , kisi ko ek dusre ke beech aane nhi deta the chahe phir voh Ghar wale hi kyun na , Jin shiva raavi ko main janti hun un dono ne toh dev aur mujha bhi aane nhi diya apne beech phir esa kya ho gaya shiva ki tum dono ne ek dusre ko itna dur kar diya itni kadvi baatein ek dusre ko keh di ek dusre ki izzat nilam kar di kyun ab alag ho rahe ho tu dusri shadi kar raha hai .. kya hai yeh sab .. ?

main janti hun kuch toh hai jo tu khud bhi janta hai per bayaan nhi karna chahta kisi se . Koi samjhe na samjhe per main samajh rahi hun . Maami hun teri mana bhut buri hun pasand nhi karti tuja per phir bhi janti hun tuja bhut ache se .. tera ghar walon se bhi zada ache se janti hu. Tuja ache se samajhne ka dava karte hai tera ghar wale teri yeh maa teri pujniya bhabhi maa yeh tera pujari gaumbi per jo sach hai na voh tuja ek din dikh jayega kon dikhawa karta hai tujhse pyar karne ka aur kon Sacha pyar karta hai .. main toh tum dono ke liya badalne ki taiyar hun kyuki ab aur nhi sehn kar sakti meri bachi ki baat hai uski khushi tujhse judi hai aur agar use tu chahiya toh main yeh bhi accept karne ko taiyar hun .

Shiva : aaaaye maami tham ja tham Jaa kitna bolegi bas kar bhai .. ek baat bata maami tu sach main meri madad hi karna chahti hai ? Tu sach main hum dono ko ek karna chahti hai hum dono ki khushi ke liya hume accept kar rahi hai badal rahi hai ? Tu .. tu kahin meri halat dekh ker meri firki toh nhi le rahi na ? Aaj tuna itni badi badi baatein toh kar di hai per yakeen nhi ho raha hai kyuki bachpan se leke aaj tak tera mera rishta main sirf nafrat ki diwar hai mera Teri taraf nafrat hai kyuki tu janti hai tuna kya kiya tha barson pehle aur tu mujhse isliya karti aaye hai kyuki tu baaki logo ki tarah mujh per apna hukum nhi chala pai . Toh ab achanak se itna badlav kyun ki tu meri madad karne ke baat kar rahi hai .

Prafulla: kyuki meri beti ki khushiyan tujhse hai shiva . Main yeh dava se keh sakti hun ki use na abhi bhi ehsaas nhi hua hai ki tu kya hai uske liya per main janti hun voh tujhse pyar karne lagi hai .. haan tune sahi suna hai shiva voh tujhse pyar kar baithi hai .. meri dobi dikri ko tujhse pyar toh ho gaya hai lekin ehsaas nhi hua hai. Aur yeh ehsaas sirf tu dila sakta hai koi aur nhi . Kaam toh tujha hi karna hoga shiva is rishte ko bachane ke liya efforts ab tuja karna hai voh jitna kar sakti thi kar chuki ab voh thak chuki hai ab voh nhi uthayegi ek kadam toh tuja hi aage ka safar taye karna hai aur use ehsaas karana hai ki voh tera liya kya hai aur jitna tu usse pyar karna hai voh bhi tujhse pyar karti hai yeh ehsaas dila use shiva .

Main khadi hun tum dono ke peecha .. tu badh aage bina socha main har tarah se tum dono ki madad karungi . Cha mahine baad talak hai na toh tera pass samajh le che mahina hi hai use apna phir se banane ke liya . Talak agar tu chahta hai toh ek hafte main bhi ho jayega lekin uska fhayada kuch nhi hoga main janti hun tuna talak liya hai toh uske peecha koi badi wajh hogi esa hi choti moti baat se tu talak lena walon main se toh nhi hai .

Kawad yatra aur janmashtami ka din jo hua so hua voh bhi muja tera hi plan lag raha hai .. tera jitna dimag kisi main hai hai nhi is ghar main . Aur rahi baat raavi ke character per sawal uthane ki toh yeh main daave se keh sakti hu Ki yeh tuna nhi tera Andar base us shiva ne bola tha jo yeh talak chahta tha , jo bhut zada pareshan hai khud se , jo ek bhut badi baat dil main dabaye baitha hai aur tu toh esa hai na shiva maine tera sath itna kuch galt kiye, tera pariwar ke sath galt kiya , meri wajh se tera papa ki death ho gai per tuna muja hamesha ijjat di mujhse apni maa ke kangan toh liya uske badle meri kalai suni nhi hone di , meri galtiyon ki saza meri beti ko kabhi nhi di , use hamesha galti karne se bachaya hein , use hamesha bura logon se bachata hai toh tu bura kaisa ho sakta hai , tujhse nafrat koi kaisa kar sakta hai .

Maine bhale hi tujhse nafrat karne ka dava kiya hai lekin aaj ek aur sach kehti hun main . Maine humesha se hi ek beta chaha hai bilkul tera jaisa . Main kabhi maa nhi ban pai phir tu aaya aur tujhe dekh ker ek alag hi lagav tha per meri kismat dekh na tuja kabhi apna beta ya bhanja bana hi nhi pai , mera stupid se lalach ne tujha mujhse dur kar diya . Meri zindagi main phir raavi aai main khush thi raavi ko apni beti ke roop main pa kar per tera moh pane ke chakar main na raavi ko bhi kho diya aur tuja bhi . Tujhse mili har nafrat har narazgi ko main tera pyar samajh ker leti thi yeh soch ker ki bhale hi pyar ke do bol nhi bolta per yeh bhi tera hi pyar hai .

Isi liya esi harkatein karti thi taki isi bhahne hi sahi tu mera pass aayega ladega kuch pal ke liya main tuja jee bhar kar dekh toh paungi . Jab main maa banne wali thi na tab muja pata chala tha ki muja ladka hoga per meri kismat likhne wale ne mujhsa voh cheen liya saatve mahine main mera garvpaat ho gaya aur doctor ne kaha ki main kabhi maa nhi ban paungi bas tabhi se ek bache ki chah thi . In teeno ladko ko dekh ker mujha voh apna pan voh lagav voh connection feel hi nhi hua jo tera aane per hua tha aur phir phir raavi ke aane per hua tha .

Maine socha ki Paisa se khushiya khareedi jaa sakti hai lekin main galt thi paisa khushi nhi milti paisa sa sirf apni khawahish puri ki jaa sakti hai khushiya pariwaar deta hai agar voh ek jut hoke rahe toh . Muja maaf kar de shiva meri har us galti ke liya main bhut sharminda hun . Kya tu muja ek baar mauka dega . Main teri maa na sahi teri maami ban ker hi khush hun . Maa ka pyar ka toh koi mol hi nhi hai main bas tuja maami ban kar hi pyar de du main samjhungi ki muja mera beta mil gaya . Tu jo kahega main uske liya ready hun . Bas muja mera beta aur beti wapis kar de . Main Tera aage apni jholi phaila rahi hun . And maami started crying thinking of her past .

By the time she stopped telling her real intentions everyone has tears in their eyes even suman had as she also had experienced the same what Prafulla had .

Shiva : aaye maami shant pehle shant hoja sans lele thoda . Aaye krish ja pani laa . itni badi badi baatein kar ke ab rula Rahi hai sabko tuja sharam nhi aati . Aur main kya bolu tuna muja bolna layak choda hi kahan hai . Dekh maami maine aaj jo suna uske baad main yeh toh nhi samajh sakta ki tujh per kya beeti hogi per aaj main tuja itna wada kar sakta hun Ki aaj se meri ek nhi do do maayein hai ek tu aur ek meri khud ki maa . Tu muja vese hi pyar dena jaisa tu apna beta ko dena chahti thi .

Tune bhale hi janam na diya ho per main keh sakta hun tu ek achi maa ban sakti hai infact tu hai tuna raavi ko jo parvarish di hai achi di hai bas tera jo lalach hai na Teri Mamta per havi ho jata hai is wajh se tu buri ban jati hai aur kuch nhi hai . Chal ab rona band kar aur yeh pani pi . Ab tu yeh mat kehna ki teri koi beti ya beta nhi hai tera pass tera dono bache hai . Jitna pyar lutana hai luta le . Ab dekh ab tune muja beta mana hai toh apni beti ko bol muja maaf kar de na ho gai galti main kuch bhi karunga jo voh bolegi bas mera pass wapis aa jaye . Saying this he kept his head in her lap with eyes streaming tears down his cheeks wetting her saree .

Prafulla: tu sach bol Raha hai na ? Main main hoon na tera pass dekhna main tuja bhut pyar dungi aur teri chipkali ko bhi hum mana hi lenga dekhna . And hugged him and kissed his forehead.

From rooms window raavi heard everything and cried and layed down on Shiva's side feeling his presence there .

Suman : aye Prafulla tune Aaj mera beta ko emotional fool toh bana diya aur sabko rula diya per tu jeet ker dikha aur sabit kar ki dishu galt ladki hai aur raavi sahi . Jis din esa hua usi wakt main shiva aur raavi ki shadi taye kar dungi aur jaisa voh chahenge vese hi hoga sab kuch .

Dhara : maa yeh aap kya kar rahe ho . Aaj pehli baar maami ne khud ko raavi ki khushi ke liya badla shiva ko apnaya yahan tak ki apna ander chupaya itna bada sach bataya toh kuch toh hoga na Jo voh esa kar rahi hain .

Gaumbi : haan maa dhara sahi keh rahi hay.. maami ko ek mauka toh de please maa maami aur raavi ko apna le please aur yeh jo tu raavi ko markundi gay bulati hai na voh bulana Chad de aur phir se uski maa ban jaa na .

KriDevta : haan maa maan jaa na please 🥺 raavi / raavi bhabhi ke liye na sahi shiva ke liya please 🥺 😭 kam se kam uska dard toh dekho na kitna tuta hua hai voh please .

Suman : aaye chup ek dum chup jab tak muja is kangdi aur iski beti raavi per aitbaar nhi ho jata aur yeh dono sabit nhi kar deta ki dishu galt aur yeh sahi thi bas baat khatam chalo chalo sab sone bhut late ho gaya hai subha uthna bhi hai time per nhi toh ghadhon ki tarah sote rahoga sab ke sab .

Then they all reluctantly went to their rooms except shiva and maami .

Shiva : maami itna janti hai toh raavi ke pass jaa aur use khana khila de dinner bhi nhi kiya usne abhi tak . Aur usse bolna agar yahan nhi rehna toh tera ghar wapis chali jaaye per khud ko esa saza mat de .

Prafulla : tu tension mat le shiva Main jati hun usko khilana per tune bhi toh nhi khaya hai kuch toh chal pehle tu kha le phir use bhi khila dungi .

Shiva : maami nhi mera gale se kuch nhi jayega please pehle tu use khila de . Phir main kha lunga paka.

Prafulla : ab dekh maa bani hun teri toh maa ki baat talega ? Chal chup chap aur kha khana tu phir raavi ke pass jayenga . Dekh mana mat karna warna main .. main teri help nhi karungi soch le . She threatened him with smug smile .

Shiva : acha chal theek hai manegi toh nhi tu .

Then both went to kitchen found nothing to eat so she made something refreshing to have and made him eat so did shiva made her eat too . Then both went to shivi's room bhut there was no response so when he saw Raavi's rooms window is slightly open so he went inside and looked at raavi who was in deep sleep with shivas shirt In her hand . Then he came out of his stupor and opened the room . When Prafulla came she said

Prafulla: yeh toh so gai ab kya karein ?

Shiva : koi ni esa kar tu bhi uske sath yahi so ja main bhar hi sora hun kal khila Dena isko khana .

Prafulla: shiva is baar himmat mat harna is baar apne dimag ki nhi apne dil ki sunna toh sab theek ho jayega . Somnath bhi tum dono ki bhut pareeksha le chuka bas ab uska annt ka samay aa gaya hai . Aur sun esa mat jaa kapde leke ja change kar ke Sona .

Shiva ( joking) : haan haan Matashree 🙏 main samajh gaya . Jaisi Teri aagya . Ab main jaun ya voh bhi cancel kar dun .

Prafulla : acha beta mujhse hushiyari . Chal bhag so jake . Subha phir se Naya din nayi kahani...

Shiva hummed and left for sleep 😴.

Next morning..

Raavi woke up and saw room was super clean and her clothes were kept out so that she get ready in them . Without thinking further she went out and saw every one quietly having their breakfast and what suprised her was shiva and her maasi were sitting together having good food in delight with bantering .

Raavi : aap abhi tak yaha ho muja lags aap chale gaye hoga aur aap aur shiva ek sath kya kar rahe ho ? Kuch toh gadbad hai? Voh un dono ko shak bhari nigahon se dekhti hai ..

Nobody talks to raavi and shiva because of suman's strict instructions else they will also have to suffer like shiva .

Prafulla: aaye raavi beta tu uth gai chal acha hai . Chal tu jaldi taiyar hoja phir main kya soch rahi thi ki hum dono shopping per chalte hain uske baad movie dekhna bhi chalenga kitna time ho gaya hum dono sath main kahin Gaye hi nhi jab se teri shadi hui hai ? Kya kehti hai acha idea hai na ? Yeh tera Bhoothnath hume mall chod dega bol raha tha .

Raavi : maasi kuch toh hua hai apko aur us bandar raha ko, aap meri maasi hi ho na ? Kahin koi behroopiya toh nhi aa gaya meri Massi ki jagh hawwwww 😵😵 aur aap aur shopping 🛍️ and movies impossible. Maasi kahin aap shiva ki mujhse burai toh nhi karna chahti shopping ke bahne aur phir se meri dusri shadi ki baat karoga bologa shiva bura hai etc etc.. mujha aapse koi baat nhi karni na muja aapke sath kahin Jana hai . Infact muja kisi se bhi baat nhi karni hai . Aur haan muja na kisi se bhi shadi nhi karni hai maine kar li hai jisse karni thi shadi bas ho gai bhut baar kar li shadi jissa karni thi toh ab aap mehrbani karo aur jao yahan se please 🥺.

Prafulla: acha acha theek hai nahi karni na tune shadi mat kar main tuja force nhi karungi . Aur haan na muja kuch hua hai na shiva ko . Main aur shiva wahin hai jo pehle the . Na hi main iski burai karne wali hun na batameezi. Tuja kahin ghumne nhi jana toh mat jaa voh bhi chalega muja . Baat bhi nhi karegi toh mat kar tuja jitna time lana hai lele per meri ek baat sun le phir main bhi chali jaungi .

Raavi : theek hai chalo per main pehle ready hoke aati hun aap na esa karo mera nashta bhi room main hi le aana bhut bhook lag rahi hai raat bhi khana nhi khaya .

Prafulla: haan haan tu jaa main leke aati hun khana .

Then raavi went and Prafulla was about to make a plate for raavi when shiva came in between and told he will do it for raavi . She obliged and let him make plate for her . After few minutes she went shivi's room and sat on the bed waiting for her daughter to come .

After 20 minutes

Raavi came inside looking beautiful but her beauty wasn't reaching her eyes she was looking pale and broken 💔.

Prafulla: aa gai chal baith pehle main tuja khana khila deti hun phir baat karte hain theek che ..

Raavi : ji maasi khila do aap bhut bhook lag rahi hai. Argument karna ka man nhi hai mera .

Then prafulla made her eat her food while shiva saw them and left to work .

After having food Prafulla begins her luck 🤞.

Prafulla: dekh raavi main tuja jo samajhne aai hun voh apna dimag dil kaan khol ker sunna aur jab tak main bolungi tu beech main mat bolna mera jane ke baad iss baat per gaur zarur karna.

Raavi : theek hai maasi aap bolo jo bolna hai main chup chap ache se sab sunungi aur beech mai nhi bolungi aur jo bhi bologa uske baare main dil se ache se dimag khol ker sochungi . Ab bolo .

Prafulla : soch raavi tuja itna farak kyun padhta hai har cheez se jo shiva karta hai . Tuja na raavi shiva ki har ek cheez se bachpan se hi farak padhta aaya hai kyun padhta hai kabhi socha hai nahi na toh kyun nhi socha kyun ignore Kiya is baat ko ? Is kyun ka jawab dhund raavi ki kyun farak padhta hai ? Jis din tu is kyun ka jawab dhund legi na teri saari problems hi solve ho jayegi. Tuja is baat se itni takleef kyun hui ki voh tuja divorce deker dusri shadi karna chahta hai ya kar raha hai ? Tuja is baat se problem kyun hui ki shiva disha ke liya ban than ke aaya stage per tera liya nhi ?

Tuja kyun takleef Hui ki disha jo karti hai shiva ko samajh kar karti hai uski feelings ko hurt nhi karti ? Tujha toh is baat se bhi takleef hui thi raavi jab shiva ne kangan wali baat chedi thi jab ki mana shiva ka plan kuch aur tha voh backfire kar gaya tha phir bhi . Arey tuja toh iss baat se bhi takleef hui thi jab tum dono kidnap hua the per usne tuja chod diya tha akele per sach yeh tha ki usne tuja choda hi nhi tha per takleef toh hui thi na bhut aur tuna uske sath galt behave Kiya tha na ?

Tuja na raavi is baat se bhi bachpan se takleef hoti hai jab koi uske maan-saman , astitva per, rehn sehn per , pehnava per , padhai - likhai per har cheez per jab koi sawal uthata hai na toh tera khoon khol uthta hai tu kaat khane ko padhti hai bhale hi tu bhi yeh sab cheeza usko bolti thi per tune yeh haq kisi Teesra ko nhi diya tha . Sach kahun toh tuja har us cheez se takleef hoti aai hai jo cheez shiva se Judi hai aur agar voh tuja kuch na bataya ya tera pass na ho aur kisi aur ko zada bhav de na tuja chod ker toh tuja baichaini kyun hoti hai ?

Soch raavi soch kyun esa kyun hota hai ? Esa kabhi tuna dev ke liya bhi feel nhi hai . Bhale hi tu dev ke naam per yaha aati thi per bidhti tu shiva se thi tuja kabhi farak nhi pada ki dev kya kar Raha hai kyun kar rahe hai kahan hai kyun hai kyu voh har wakt gayab rehta hai jab tu milna chahti hai ya voh bhahna kyun bana deta tha har baar per tera liya voh matter kabhi karta nhi tha matter tuja shiva karta tha voh kya karta hai kyun karta hai kis liya karta hai kis se mil raha hai kyu mil raha hai kon uske dost hai sab Janna hota tha tuja shiva se related per kyun uska jawab tera ander hi hai raavi dhund usse .

Raavi dekh abhi bhi wakt hai wakt nikla nhi hai , shiva se Sula kar baat kar jo bhi hai tera dil main use bata toh sahi tabhi toh use pata chalega na ki tu kya chahti hai khud se kaisa samjhega voh haan mana kuch cheeza khud samajh leni chahiya har cheez batai nhi jati per jab dilon main dooriyan aa jayen na toh har cheez batani padhti hai taki rishton main lagi is manmutav ki gath ko khola jaa sake . Per sabse pehle khud ko samajh khud ke dil main jo asmanjas ki gath hai use khol . Tu khud apne ander jhankh ker dekh tune abhi bachpan se leke aaj ki tareekh tak kya kya kiya hai kis liya Kiya hai kyun kiya hai . Kya tu shiva ko samajh pai abhi tak agar shiva nhi samajh aaya tuja toh kya tu samajh paai use ?

Kya tuja kabhi dil se dekha samjha uska man main kya hai uski bhavnayen kya hai ? Agar voh yeh sab tera liya nhi samajh paya toh tuna samjha use ? Khud hi soch agar voh galt tha toh kya tu sahi thi hamesha se tune bhi toh theek nhi kiya na uske sath . Agar usne tujh per apna kabhi haq nahi jataya , adhikar nhi jataya toh kya tu use voh haq de pai kya tu use voh adhikar de pai ? Tune nhi diya voh haq voh adhikar , kabhi nhi bata pai tu kya sochti hai kya feel karti hai toh expect kyun kar Rahi hai ki voh samjhe voh confess kare . Tune bhi toh uski biwi hona per adhikar Kam aur ehsaan zada kiya hai kiya na ?

Agar yeh shadi uske liya compromise thi toh tera liya bhi toh yeh shadi compromise hi thi na ? Agar voh is shadi se khush nhi tha toh tu bhi toh khush nhi thi is shadi se ? Tu bhi toh azadi chahti thi shiva se jaisa voh chahta tha tujhse ? Voh bhi toh insaan hi hai na raavi jaisa tu hai . Insaan ko insaan ki tarah samjhna chahiya . Maine jo galtiyan ki so ki meri budhi bhrasht ho gai thi paison ke lalach main moh maya ke wajh se per tu toh is sab se bhut pare hai raavi .

Soch raavi ab esa kya badal gaya achanak se khud se baat kar khud ko samajh . Khud ki feelings ko pehchan. Sahi galt acha Bura tu ache se janti hai bas ignore kar deti hai bachpane main use gaur se dekh . Phir kahin Jake tuja sab baatein clear hongi tabhi toh tu shiva se baat kar payegi na esa hi baat karne jayegi toh ladai ke siva kuch nhi hoga . Toh jab bhi tu shiva se baat karke jayegi khule dil se jana mind clear kar ke jana aur haan pehle uski sun Lena , samjhna ache se uski baat ko phir apni sunana apni baat ache se rakhna phekna nhi , use apni baat samjhana ki esa kyu tha vesa kyun tha . Esa sort out hoti hai baatein ek dusre ke sath .

Divorce koi choti cheez nhi hai raavi . Har choti cheez main talak nhi liya jaa sakta . Khud hi soch na raavi kuch toh Karan hoga na yahe pass tuja talak dena ka esa hi itni badi baat usne tera samne kake rakh di tujhse bina puche ghar main salah mashwara kiya Bina jo kabhi esa karta nhi tha usne achanak yeh divorce paper tujha pakda diya . Tu dhund uske peecha ka sach . Baat ko pakad aur use suljha le beta . Talak koi achi cheez nahi hai zindagi bhar ka voh hisab hai jo kisi ko na mila . Sukh chain sab le jata hai yeh talak . Sun meri baat tera pass sirf che mahina hai use apna banane ke liya toh soch samajh ker kadam uthana . Aur himmat mat harna is baar . Tuja agar shiva dil se pasand hai toh baat ko suljha aur use apna bana le . Talak apne aap ruk jayega . Tu suman behn ki chinta mat karna unko main sambhal lungi . Koi nhi aayega tum dono ke beech .

Acha tu soch main chalti hun agar tujha ghar aana ho toh aa jana tera ghar hai jab chahe aa sakti hai rehna .

Then she went and met shiva .

Prafulla: shiva dekh maine apni taraf se tum dono ko samjha Diya hai ab tum dono per depend karta hsh ki tum dono kya samajhte ho aur kya sochte ho . Tum dono jante ho apna kya sahi hai aur kya galt . Us din ka intezar rahega mujha jab tum dono aake khaoge maami hum talak nhi le rahe humari Sula ho gai hai .

Shiva : voh kya chahti hai kuch bataya ?

Prafulla : abhi toh nhi wakt legi sochna samajhne main . Tu wakt dena use .

Shiva : theek hai per ek baat toh bata tu kya chahti hai hum ek ho jaaye ?

Prafulla: haan ek ho jaao kyuki disha ya koi aur ladki tera layak nhi hai . Tu dharti per dhul per chalne nhi aaya hai aasmaan chune aaya hai aur Tera aasman raavi hai . Voh hi teri ardhangini hai teri sachi jeevan sathi . Main galt thi isliya apni galtiyon ko sudhar rahi hun ab .

Suman : aaye kangdi bas kar apna yeh bhashan aur Prem raag aur jaa yahan se aur haan yaad rakhna sirf che mahine hai tum teeno ke pass khud ko sahi sabit karne ke liya uske baad dishu hi meri Bahu banegi aur shiva ki biwi bhi .

Prafulla : wakt ka pahiya kab apni raftar badal de kuch pata nhi chalta suman behn . Main wapis aaungi aur apki dishu ka sach bhi leke aaungi . Aap pachtaoga ki aap kitni badi galti kar rahin hai wada hai aapse royegi aap aur maafi bhi mangengi apna dono bachon se . Jai somnath 🙏 rab rakha .

All : jai somnath 🙏

Both the souls were broken 💔 and miserable but couldn't brake the ice of thousands of thoughts that were creating confusion in their minds .

TO BE CONTINUED.......

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Toh muja yeh batao ki apko badli hui Prafulla kaisi lagi ?

Yeh batao ki Prafulla ka sach sun ker kon kon shock hua hai ?

Kya Prafulla apni baat per khari reh payegi ?

Kya voh shiva aur raavi ko kareeb la payegi aur talak ruk jayega ?

Kya hai disha ka sach ? Esa kya pata hai Prafulla ko jo voh sabut ke sath paush karegi ?

Kaisa laga Prafulla aur shiva ka pyar ?

Kaisa lagi raavi aur Prafulla ki baatein ? Achi lagi uski Prem raag ki baatein ?

Kon jeetaga is love war main shivi ka pyar ya suman ?

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