Manan ff- I love u my babu by nj94479

I really like the way you started the story.

Concept is also good.

You have a bright future on wattpad

I am expecting a lot more from you.

But one thing please try to give information about characters and story line. That's it.

Your grammar is also good.

Please try to write like this only.

I would like to rate it 9 out of 10

May you have a bright future on wattpad.

With regards,