A manan ff-Viraag by PranjaliInd
I am a fan of all those who wrote books on manan and you are one of them
Coming to your story,
The thing i love the most is how you show the female protagonist a strong lady. I just love it.
Beside losing her love she fights for herself and her love is excellent.
Story plot is also awesome.
There were few grammatical mistakes. Please try to improve them.Then your story would be really fantastic.
I like to rate your story 8 out of 10
With regards
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