For @TheEntireStarClan. Next oc will be Silvermoon.

Name: Brindleberry

This is so cute! Brindle- is a very neglected prefix. Berry is used a bit more often, but it still fits well, and the double b makes me happy :3

Gender: She-cat

Appearance: Brindle colored she-cat with a white belly that has silver stripes and hazel eyes

That is soo pretty! I've never seen silver stripes on the belly like that, in any oc, like.. ever. Brindle colored is very neglected, as are hazel eyes, so I love this very much. Do not change it at all.

Clan: SkyClan

Nice. I imagine her as more of a RiverClan or WindClan cat, but this is fine.

Rank: On and off warrior/queen

Alright :3

Personality: She is kind and caring, but clumsy when it comes to hunting. She is stern with her kits, but very loving because she wants them to be the best they can.

Nice!!! Very motherly. She has flaws, but not very major ones. I'd recommend making her overprotective, bossy, something like that. But other than that it's fine, I like the motherly personality. Cats like this are normally neglected.

Backstory: I'm just giving a basic summary.
When she was a queen, she had three litters. The first one had Rainweb, and he lived a normal life, but in her second litter, she had Dewwhisker. She suffer post natal depression from him, and that's what the story focuses on. But in her third litter, she had Shrewkit and Swiftkit, two she-kits. They were named after cats that died apprentices. But she died shortly after birth because of complications.

I like this. A book from the pov of a momma cat is great, I love queens. Dewwhisker is an adorable name. I'd like to hear more about her life other than her kits, though. Oh well.

·~*OVERALL*~·
9/10! I think you should add some major flaws, and tell me a bit more about her backstory, then she will be perfect!