For @Skittykitty605.. Next oc will be Tawnymist.

Name: Silvermoon

I've seen this name a lot. Silver- is quite overused, and -moon is too. I like it though, this name is beautiful.

Gender# She-cat (I no. I'm sorry)

It's alright lol.

Clan: MoonClan

Pretty overused, but that's fine.

Appearance: Light silver tabby with white chest and ice-blue eyes.

Silver tabbies are also used very often, same with ice blue eyes. Her appearance matches her name, but I'd recommend making it a bit more unique.

Rank: Deputy

O. Okay.

Personality: Sometimes seems older and wiser than she normally is, but is very blunt and has a hard time dealing with annoying cats. Is very good around kits.

This is nice! She's got flaws, which is good. This isn't your typical protagonist, so I love it a lot.

Backstory- her father died in a battle with rats after silverkit and two other kits snuck out of camp. When she was a warrior, she fell in love with her former mentor, flameclaw, and they became mates. Soon after, a huge hurricane struck moonclan and oceanclan territories, and prey became scarce. Parts of both clans separated from them to find a new home (hello dawn of the clans) and flameclaw revealed that he had only become mates with Silvermoon to make another cat jealous and left with the departing cats. She eventually became mates with nightshadow, flameclaw's brother, and is currently the deputy of moonclan.

Wow, Flameclaw is a jerk. I like this backstory. I haven't seen a hurricane happen in fanfiction before, so great job for originality. I like this a lot, I haven't read Dawn of the Clans but this dose remind me of it :3 I like it! 🎉

Mate- flameclaw , currently nightshadow

I hate Flameclaw >:l Nightshadow is a cool name.

Kits-lunarkit, mistkit, pebblekit, and darkkit (darkkit was captured by twolegs as an apprentice and is currently living happily as coal in the twoleg place)

Poor Darkkit :/ I like these names. Lunarkit is a bit weird, but oh well. I like Pebblekit.

·~*OVERALL*~·
Her backstory is really cool. So is her personality. I'd say 8/10. Her name isn't the most unique, but it is pretty. Her appearance is a bit dull and overused. I'd make it a bit more unique :3