For @Stardustdragon345. Next oc will be Peppernose.

Deerfrost

This reminds me of an oc I have, Fawnfrost. Lol. I like this name, but -frost is way overused. Deer- is fine. It's a cute name, but it just isn't that original. I know how hard it can be to be original when there are SO many ocs but.. -frost just seems a bit overused

She cat I know such a surprise. You totally don't get all she cats XD

Pfft yea

Shadowclan

Oh nice, I like to see ShadowClan cats. It's underused.

She's perky and really really stubborn when it comes to sticking with her point of view. She is sometimes a bit rude without meaning to be. She is good at remembering where she has been but is a little lost minded when it comes to remembering some tasks. Let's just say she remembers what she wants to remember. She's nice but very introverted. Though when it comes to debates she will defiantly speak out about her opinion.

Very descriptive! I love this, good job. She doesn't seem stereotypical of a ShadowClan cat, which is also good. Lots of good and bad traits. She's very opinionated, which is an underused personality trait but also a very good one.

She is a light brown (deer colored) she cat with white speckles across her nose  and down her back. She has a white fluffy tail and brown eyes. She also has two white stripes on her ears and white paws.

Aww ;-; she's cute! I always found it weird when people make their oc look just like the animal that they're named after, but this makes it work. Brown and white is always a good combination. I love the brown eyes, they're underused.

She was born to Shadowclan to Silverlake and Duskseer. Though three moons after she was born her mother disappeared. Her father, Duskseer, wasn't sure how to take care of kits so he distanced himself from them. When Deerpaw became a med. cat apprentice her father finally decided to try and be a father but Deerpaw always made him go away. She wasn't happy with him at all. Duskseer tried making it up to her  and eventually she some what forgave him. Yet to her she never really considered him a father. She was also made fun of a lot for what she looked like and how small she was but she always shrugged it off. When her mentor, Greymoon died she had to give herself her own med. cat name. She named herself after her still born sister, Frostkit. Deerfrost  always hung around camp and never traveled far from it, besides when she went to Moonpool. Unlike most med. cats lately she never fell in love but treated every kit in Shadowclan like they were her own. When her father died in a battle against rouges Deerfrost became more opinionated because he never got a proper burial. Not a lot of cats like when she talks about her opinions but everyone just thinks it's annoying so they always tell her to shut up. She never figured out what happened to her mother.

Nice!! This is long and descriptive, I like it. Her struggles with her father really make a good plot, and an original one. I like that she named herself after her sister, but I also still don't like -frost. It's just.. Overused, which I've already said. This is a good backstory, I don't really see any problems with it.

.-*OVERALL*-.

This is a lot like the last oc. The personality, appearance, and backstory are great– but the name is just not original. I'll give her the same score, 9/10. Good job.