For @OnlyRomanoIsBest. Next oc will be Pinekit.

I'm gonna do a second one hehehe

You absolute rebel.

Name: Honeyripple

Very cool! Honey- is used pretty often, but it's beautiful. Definitely fits her appearance and personality perfectly. It's also what I would expect for a queen. -ripple isn't used too often, and it really goes with the prefix and it makes her seem like a very calm, sweet cat. This name is great.

Gender: She-cat ( I'm so sorry forgive me )

Dude. It's fine.

Appearance: A long-furred, feathery pelted she-cat. Her fur is a warm dull golden colour with hints of brownish-tan streaks. Her underbelly is a creamy white, as are her paws. She has an elegant, dainty build, and her paws are small and delicate. Her tail is rather fluffy and is dipped in cream-white at the end. Her ears are small and rounded, resembling a lion's. Her eyes are a bright amber colour, tinted with warm orange.

Wow, you are amazing at writing cats' descriptions. I can imagine this perfectly; like a soft, delicate version of Lionblaze. This. Is. Amazing. DO NOT CHANGE ANYTHING!

Clan: ValleyClan

I've seen this a few times, but it's awesome. It's a realistic Clan name.

Rank: Medicine Cat/Queen ( you'll see why )

*crosses fingers* please have a reason for this cliche, pplllleeeeeaaaaaassssee

Personality: She has a rather sweet, caring disposition, which rather fits her looks. She's very kind and gentle, and is often soft-spoken. However, if pushed, she can become more rude and straightforward and often employs a tactic of shaming a particularly stubborn patient. She has a nasty streak at times and holds grudges for a long time. However those on her good side will say that she is mischievous and delightful and cares deeply for her Clan.

Again, very descriptive. I can tell that you've put a lot of work into perfecting this oc. This is the perfect personality; it fits her name and appearance. This is not a common personality for main ocs. Excellent job on originality, I applaud you for this.

Backstory: She was born for the medicine cat position. Her mother, Dappleflight, was a golden she-cat with tan streaks and blazing orange eyes, and was the current medicine cat. Her father was Lizardbelly, a tan tom cat with a creamy white underbelly and paws and amber eyes, a senior warrior at the time. She was trained early on by her mother for the role as a medicine cat. See, ValleyClan is one of four clans resting in an uncharted forest. They are: ValleyClan, WillowClan, CliffClan, and BrackenClan. They had a different set of ideals and rules, and many things were different from the originals. For example, medicine cats could have families. Now back to Honeykit lol. She was apprenticed to her mother at eight moons and began advanced training, often out in the field when they were fighting other clans. Once she recieved her full name, Honeyripple, she and her mother worked side by side as medicine cats. Honeyripple began developing feelings for a senior warrior, Smokegaze, a murky black tom with unusual grey eyes. Encouraged by her mother, she asked him to be mates, and he accepted. Soon after, she became pregnant with her kits, and, assured he would have a continued bloodline, her father retired to the elder's den, along with her mother. Honeyripple fully took over med cat position and soon bore kits, Maplekit, Sagekit, and Copsekit. Currently, she's preparing Copsekit for the medicine cat position so that when he has kits, she can retire to the elders den and be with her incredibly aged parents.

I love this. It's... simple. Just a good life, not really any death or destruction. I like how medicine cats can have kits in this Clan, I don't really understand why they aren't allowed to in the original Clans. Anywho, this is a very good backstory. I'm not left with any questions, everything makes sense, and it's realistic.

Mate: Smokegaze- a murky black tom with hints of silver and white tinting his fur. He has short, bristly fur and half a tail. His eyes are an unusual foggy grey colour.
Kits: Maplekit- a honey coloured she-kit that inherited her mother's delicate, fairy-like looks. Her eyes are like her father's, but have a lighter hint of silver.
Sagekit- a smoky grey she-kit with a cream underbelly and cream legs. Her tail is half like her father's and her fur is between her mother's feathery pelt and her father's short, bristly one. She has sharp, calculating amber eyes.
Copsekit- A strikingly handsome tom-kit with mainly grey fur, but large, bright patches of his mother's golden pelt. His fur is soft and short, and has a glimmery sort of quality. He's constantly cleaning it from dirt. He's got a muscular build but also some of his mothers effeminate features. His eyes are a bright, clear amber with rings of silver around the iris. ,

Wow! Super descriptive. I'd like to know what her kits' warrior names will be. Not taking points off for that, I'm just curious.

Oh I'm gonna add just a bit of extra info to clear this up
-They always have at least one nursing queen, their clan is very prosperous, so they could easily care for Honeyripple's kits until they are old enough to be off milk
-they think eight moons rather than six moons is good for apprentice training; they're more developed and have stronger bonds
-honeyripple received advanced training because during her kithood her mother taught her the basics

I love this. Enough said.

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