For @Stardustdragon456. Next oc will be Shard.

Riverthorn

Because she's in RiverClan, River- is a forbidden prefix. It's reserved for their founder, River Ripple. Other than that, -thorn is a very cute suffix. Not overused. I like the name overall, it rolls off the tongue well.

She cat dun dun duuuuuun so unexpected

Monster

She's a tiny brown tabby shecat with blind Amber eyes. She has white paws and light brown toes. She has lighter tabby marks than her base color brown. She has a fluffy ringed tail. She has a long scar on her neck and a scar on her cheek. Also white muzzle and chest/belly.

I normally don't like brown tabbies, but this is actually alright. Amber eyes are always used with tabbies for some reason, but they are underused overall. I love how detailed this is. The brown toes, ringed tail, etc make this a more unique appearance.

Riverclan

Yes

She was born in Riverclan to Ravenwillow and Greywhisker. When she was a kit she wondered off and ran into a fox. This is where her scars came from but during the attack the fox threw her into a thorn patch and the thorns scrapped her eyes, causing blindness. After the incident she didn't trust much cats and was extremely scared of everything. Though when she became an apprentice her mentor, Roselily, trained her to use her amplified senses to sense cats around her. She could here better and smell better and feel the shaking of the ground. With the help of her mentor Riverpaw amplified those skills and was able to live a 'normal' life. When she became a warrior she asked Juniperstar to choose her own name. Because of her accident she chose the suffix thorn. She fell in love with a cat named Thunderstrike but didn't live long enough to have kits. Though 8 moons after becoming a warrior a flood swept through the camp and Riverthorn was washed away. Her body was found on the bank by Thunderclan who brought the body to Riverclan.

This is cool! I love love LOVE that she wasn't born blind like most blind ocs. I also love how she reacted realistically after the accident. Then she pulled a Crowfeather and chose her own name. I like it... I like it. Great job.

She was introverted, overly terrified of everything, snappy, quiet, nice to those she chooses to talk to. She can be sensitive and a bit moody at times. She prefers solitude but can be very open when a friend comes around.

This is really nice, too! It seems like most people make their ocs shy and introverted, but you have a good reason to do so. Not many people describe their ocs as sensitive and moody. Really, good job.

Mother: Ravenwillow

I like this!

Father: Greywhisker

Cute

Siblings: none

Oh nu

Age: 36 moons

Kinda young.

Mate: Thunderstrike

Another forbidden name. Thunder, River, Shadow, and Wind are banned :/ this name is also really overused

·~*OVERALL*~·

9/10! The ONLY thing I don't like about this is the forbidden name. Sorry, but I had to remove a point for that :l