For @Flareclaw

Name: Scorchpaw

I'm going to take a wild guess and say that this cat is ginger. Eh, it fits their appearance, and it's not overused.

Rank: Apprentice

Okay :3

Clan: DeerClan

Why are they called DeerClan? Clans normally have reasons behind them; Their territory or abilities, for example. RiverClan is called RiverClan because they live by a river, and SkyClan is SkyClan because they are great at climbing trees. Or was it named after their founder? Deer-something? Do they live in a place where there are a lot of deer.. Do they have long legs like deer.. This has nothing to do with your oc I'm just curious.

Personality: Very annoying but funny. Can be sweet and kind.

A typical apprentice. Not that that's a bad thing; they're young and inexperienced, so it's typical that they'd be annoying. Reminds me of Berrynose lol.

Appearance: Has a fiery pelt.

Fits their appearance. What about eye color? Are they amber? Blue? Green? Yellow?

Backstory: "I don't know."

Fair enough. It's hard to come up with a backstory for a cat who's very young, like an apprentice. This makes me laugh, though.

Mate: none

Good.

·~*OVERALL*~·
Honestly, like, 2/10. That's just because I'm not given much to work with! I mean, I don't know this cat's eye color, backstory.. OR EVEN THEIR GENDER! Like, I can't judge a cat that I hardly know anything about. I'm thinking this is just more of a background character, but XD

Please be more descriptive next time! Sorry if this seems very rude.