Reedsnap

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For @acwallin

Name: Reedsnap

I LOVE this name. It's a simple prefix, just Reed, nothing special. But then the suffix makes it one of the most unique and cute names I've seen :o I loooove it. Snap is so cute. So dang cute, man.

Gender: tom

:D :D :D

Rank: Warrior

Okay c:

Clan: ThunderClan (formerly RiverClan)

Alright :D Not much really to say about that.

Personality: To most cats in the Clan, he is just very normal and not unique, he is kind and caring, with a select few friends. Though he was a RiverClan cat, he hates water and overall getting wet. Reedsnap is a bit awkward and can be clumsy when he's embarrassed.

This is so cute! I can tell that Reedsnap is a very carefully thought out character. He's a drypaw, which is absolutely adorable, too. Like Leopardstar. I kinda like Leopardstar. Anyway, he's got good and bad personality traits and a name that fits perfectly. There isn't really anything I would change at all. THIS. IS. GREAT!

Appearance: (sorry I can't save photos for some reason so I had to screenshot it)

I

imagine Reedsnap as a light brown tabby for some reason, but this is great ~

Backstory: Reedsnap was an ordinary, drypawed RiverClan warrior. Not even he expected himself to jump into an overflowing river when a ThunderClan she-cat fell. He changed that day and for almost three moons met with her, a ThunderClan warrior named Tigerstripe, until she told him she was expecting kits. That's when Reedsnap changed Clans for good, his newfound loyalty to ThunderClan never wavering.

RiverClan cat saving ThunderClan cat from the river then falling in love..? Where have I heard that before..? Hmm, oh, right!

Silverstream :D no but I love Silverstream and Graystripe. And this Reedsnap and Tigerstripe thing is even better, because there's no tragic ending!

But really, this is a great backstory. It has the different Clan love cliche, but you did it right! And there was no tragic death!

It really proves that Reedsnap is an awesome, loyal cat. I love him. And his name is ADORABLE.

Mate: Tigerstripe

A pretty overused name, but what can I say? I also have an oc named Tigerstripe O.o

Kits: Boneshadow and Stormfrost

Why would you name your kit Bonekit..? No but these are awesome names. Especially Stormfrost. It fits her appearance so well :o

·~*OVERALL*~·
10/10! I actually do not think I would change ANYTHING about this guy. He's such a well developed character that any change would just mess him up. This is honestly one of the best ocs I've seen, so GOOD JOB!

Keep doing what you're doing :3

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