For @Im1604

Name: Skyleap

This is a cute name! It suits her looks really well. Sky- as a prefix is a bit overused in warriors fanfiction, but I love it. And I love this name.

Gender: she-cat

Of course >·<

Appearance: Dappled gray with one white paw and light blue eyes.

This is such a pretty appearance. It suits her name soooo well! Blue is a very overused eye color, but it suits her name; sky blue for Skyleap.

I like the dappled gray, like clouds in the sky.

Clan: WindClan

My favorite! I love WindClan cats so much. This also suits her name and appearance, so yaaaay!

Rank: Warrior

Mhm.....

Personality: Independent, reserved, loyal, shy

Does she have any flaws? Well, I guess you could consider being reserved and shy flaws, if you want. Idk, I really like this. It's not a stereotype for WindClan, as far as I know. Just maybe give her a few flaws..

Backstory: She was born on a cloudy day and named for her pelt being the same color as the sky. As a kit she loved to play with her littermates, Antkit and Dovekit. She was apprenticed to Hawksoar at six moons and became a warrior at 11 moons. Her current age is 35 moons. Just after she became a warrior, there was a huge battle against ThunderClan and her mother was killed. She still grieves for her.

I love this. It's short and simple, but it provides a pretty solid backstory. I love how you included the reason she was named Skykit. I'm also glad that it WASN'T because of her eye color.

Maybe mention a bit more about her mother's death or some other dramatic event. Just bringing that up because you can't make much of a storyline out of an average, everyday warrior cat.. you know?

·~*OVERALL*~·
I like her! 9/10. Maybe just add some more interesting things to her backstory, like: Does she have a mate? Any kits? Whatever happened to Dove kit and Antkit? Things like that. Also add some flaws, like she could be stubborn, annoying, clingy, lonely, etc etc etc.

I looove her name!!

By the way, if all goes well, Thornclaw should be the next rating I do. Sorry to keep you all waiting.