For @CoonLight.

Name: Spottedlight

This is a cool name!! Spotted, I've found, is pretty overused in warrior names. I like it though, and I think it's cool how she was named after Spottedleaf.

Though I don't really like Spottedleaf....

Gender: she-cat, but she's a tomboy

I like that. At least she isn't the feminine, delicate medicine cat stereotype....

Appearance: Tortoiseshell with light gray eyes.

Are gray eyes a thing? I guess they are.. but that's cool, gray eyes, I like that.

I don't see Tortoiseshell ocs much, so I like this. I like Tortoiseshells.

But the word is so long....

Clans: She is currently part of 2 Clans, her friend's Clan: SeaClan and her other friend's Clan: MystikClan.

That is.. confusing. Does she like rotate between the 2? Take turns? Lol. Is she stuck in some sort of drama or does she plan to stay like that?

It seems like a bit much to be part of TWO Clans...

Also it's mystic, not mystik, but I guess you did that on purpose..? Is there a reason that there is simple SeaClan and then MystikClan has a special name, or no?

Rank: medicine cat in both Clans

How does she handle caring for two Clans worth of cats? Seems very stressful.

Personality: Very tomboyish. She hangs out a lot with her friends, Oakstar of SeaClan and Ravenstar of MytsikClan. But she is very kind, and the medicine cat of both Clans, and strives for eternal peace for all Clans. She is very smart though, and gets truly depressed when any cat dies.

This is nice! Maybe give her some flaws (She should be anxious and stressed from all her duties..) but that's all. She's got good medicine cat qualities but she's not stereotypical.

Backstory: When she was a kit, her father, Shadowscar, thought she was like a cat from the stories he'd heard in the nursery, Spottedleaf. Through much persuasion, Shadowscar was able to convince his mate, Blossomwave, to change her name to Spottedkit. Once she learned the meaning of her name, she became a true medicine cat, which SeaClan hadn't had in moons. All others before her had a mate and kits. After going to many gatherings, the leaders of two Clans, she noticed a group of toms in StoneClan. From that day on, she was best friends with Dusktail, Bouncepelt, and Shadeclaw.

Well... I have questions. If they aren't in the original Clans, how to they know about Spottedleaf? Is this so far in the future that there are different Clans? If so, has Spottedleaf really been remembered for that long?!

You haven't mentioned anything about how she ended up in both Clans, either.

And how does she manage to live with a paw in three different Clans? Friends in one, duties in the others... seems stressful.

Other than those things, this is pretty cool. On a random side note, I have an oc named Shadeclaw :3 lol.

·~*OVERALL*~·

5/10. Honestly, not trying to be rude, but this could use a bit of work. Working between the Clans seems hard, and I hope that she has an apprentice to help her too. If she doesn't, she should get one soon, because there are medicine cats that can't handle caring for one Clan, let alone two.

Sorry for the kinda negative review..