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Name: Halffern I really dislike how names have the same letter at the end of the prefix and start of the suffix.
Past names: Halfkit, Halfpaw
Future names: none
Why the prefix?: Because of her pelt.  Why the suffix?: Because she bounces back after hardships like a fern after leaf-bare.
Description: From her nose to her tail tip, half of her pelt is white and the other half is black, she has one bright green eye and one dark blue eye.
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Medicine cat noice
Past ranks: loner, kit, apprentice medicine cat was she always a med app is so say med app because just saying apprentice could get confusing.
Age: 16 moons still quite young, she must have worked hard, like really hard to get her med name so young.
Age at death: 22 moons so young
Clan: IslandClan I like how I'm not getting to many cannon clans anymore
Past clan: none
Personality: She is shy, kind, helpful and sometimes a little scared around other cats. Needs more
Likes: Helping others, ferns and kits.
Dislikes: Bullies, the ocean and fish. So is Islandclan an island in the sea?? How did a bunch of cats get there is so??
Kin: Parents are unknown, adoptive mother- Oceaneyes (blue-grey she cat with a white paw and light blue eyes), Mentor- Lightningslash (dusty brown time with a pale yellow stripe running from between his ears to the tip of his tail), apprentice - none yet.
Backstory: Her parents abandoned her when she was a kit, Oceaneyes found her and brought her to the clan, when she was a kit she got bullied by the other kits and queens because of her fur. That's is plan stupid.

A few things. Add more detail with the personality plus Islandclan, and give a bit more detail about her life not just kit hood. Why she became a med etc and you mentioned she would die at 22 moons that's no far away. Why does she die?? Etc. don't leave questions, make sure they're all answered.

I rate Halffern a 5/10 needs more detail and you should be all good.

Thank you for taking the effort to put in a form.