Ibelongs to: @Dawnstar16Name: SuntailPretty!Appearance: Suntail is an orange she-cat with white paws, belly, and tail tip. She was a large scar across her chest from where she was fatally injured.Age: 33 moons at deathGender: She-catFamily:Mother- Larktail (Deceased)Father- Stormpelt (Deceased)Sister(s)- NoneBrother(s)- Nightshade (Alive)Rank: Warrior/Dark Forest ResidentClan: FireClan/Dark Forest

Interesting ^.^

Personality: Suntail is a very skilled fighter and uses her words carefully. She can be very crafty when reporting to Flintstar. She has a strong hatred for anyone who liked Flintstar, Wolfsong, or any FireClan warriors.Backstory: Suntail was a member of Fireclan during Flintstar's first two years of leading Fireclan. Just after her warrior ceremony, Suntail would visit a Treeclan tom called Wolfsong. They fell in love and Suntail had their two kits during Leafbare, when Fireclan was at its lowest point. She named one Owlkit and the other Eaglekit. Wolfsong, wanting a closer relationship with his kits, told Wavestar about his love for Suntail, begging him to retrieve what Treeclan deserved.

That can't be good. O.o

Wavestar at first said no but eventually agreed that the kits must be Treeclan warriors, not Fireclan. During the attack on Fireclan, the Treeclan deputy, Clearfur, attacked and killed Eaglepaw, not knowing that she was one of the kits who belonged to Wolfsong. Suntail attacked him and defended Owlpaw for the rest of the battle. Afterwards, in her grief and anger, Suntail snuck into the Treeclan camp and killed Wolfsong. She found out that he had a new mate that was a TreeClan warrior and injured her before taking a life from Wavestar. Flintstar knew that Suntail had done this because of a vision he and Yellowfur shared and exiled her from Fireclan.Suntail, now enraged at her clanmates for betraying her, found a rogue who hated the clans for killing his brother, and plotted revenge with him. Suntail hid in a tree while the rogue distracted the patrol that Flintstar was in. Leaping off of the branch, Suntail landed on Flintstar, knocking him senseless and startling the other warriors. Suntail killed one of the cats, but was fatally injured by Nightshade, her own brother, before she could escape with the rogue. When she got away, Suntail bled out and joined the Dark Forest. She now causes chaos among members of Fireclan that were close to Flintstar as well as kin to Wolfsong, including Dawnstar.

Mate: Wolfsong- Grey tabby tom with dark green eyes

Kits: Owlpaw (Deceased) 

How did Owlpaw die?

 Eaglepaw (Deceased)

Good:

Suntail is well developed! She has a great backstory!

Bad: 

I'm confused.. 

If Wolfsong  had another mate after Suntail, why would he turn on  Her and try and take the kits, especially by telling Wavestar? It usually is very bad when cats have kits with another clan. What happenedto Owlpaw? If he is Dead, how did he die?

Overall: 8\10!

:D