[ dayhaze- ]

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name :: dayhaze

past name(s) :: daydream, daypaw

name at death :: n/a

when i first read this i thought daydream was a warrior name lol

4 out of 5

reasoning for prefix :: her name as a kittypet was daydream/her appearance reminds others of daylight

reasoning for suffix :: due to her daydreamy personality, she drifts off a lot

i do like the reasonings you provided, congratulations (?)

5 out of 5

gender :: female

sexuality :: biromantic

2 out of 2

appearance :: flame point ragdoll with long, silky white fur and blue eyes

short, but i also don't know what you would add to make it more elaborate

giving her a breed is a nice touch, knowing that it's realistic since she wasn't born a feral cat

5 out of 5

personality :: dayhaze is rather soft. she prefers napping than working, but enjoys teaching her apprentice, stonepaw. she is often distant from her clanmates, and has a twisted connection to starclan

define twisted- why is she a medicine cat if her connection to starclan isn't good? also, why was she accepted into the clan at all, if she's so lazy and soft? most likely the clan cats would look down on her for befitting the kittypet stereotype

i'd say to add more negative traits to your cat, since she seems to be a dreamer and little else. your description also needs to be longer; you haven't given me much to work with, and i still don't know much about her

3 out of 10

current rank :: medicine cat of shadowclan

not graded

family ::

(mother) birdie - flame point ragdoll female with blue eyes and a pink ribbon collar

(father) macho - ragdoll male with brown points and blue eyes.

what kind of name is that i-

(sister) claudia - ragdoll female with brown points and blue eyes.

note: chocolate point is the official term

friends ::

stonepaw - a dark gray tom with amber eyes

applestar - short fawn tom with green eyes and a stout frame

enemies :: brownie - a long-haired dark brown tabby tom with tufts on his ears and amber eyes

significant other :: caesar - brown spotted tabby she-cat with yellow eyes

apprentices :: stonepaw - see above

kits :: none

good on you for not giving breeds to the random bred cats

also good on you for knowing what fawn is

note: i would write stonepaw as blue and specify what type of tabby brownie is [ mackerel, classic, spotted, ticked ]

again, not very long... you've only given me the templates for these cats- put descriptions beyond fur colour and eye colour!

5 out of 10

backstory :: t/w neglect, animal abandonment, mentions of abuse

daydream was born to macho and birdie with her sister, claudia. macho and birdie had been bred together by their owners to make good show cats for well, a cat show. daydream was adopted to a household with another cat named caesar, and she had her first cat show. she lost, and since her owner was disappointed, they abandoned her near shadowclan territory. [ where's that 'person' i just wanna talk 👀 ] alone, hungry and scared, daydream slept in a bush for most of greenleaf. [ but how does she not starve to death, not knowing how to hunt and not being near twolegs? or maybe shadowclan is near twolegs and i forgot but idk ] a kind shadowclan tom, the medicine cat named woodwhisker, offered daydream a place as his apprentice. daydream agreed, and joined shadowclan as daypaw. she was a good apprentice, but dozed off sometimes. when daypaw was out collecting herbs, she came across caesar again, who hadn't failed one cat show. caesar was glad to see daypaw again, and the two of them talked for a while, before daypaw returned to camp. daypaw and caesar kept on meeting once every quarter-moon, until when daypaw became dayhaze. caesar was bred with an abusive tom, brownie, and though they aren't dayhaze's, she likes hearing caesar talk about them [ i assume 'they' refers to her kits ]. she then got an apprentice, stonepaw, who she often left to his own devices while she visited caesar. [ bad dayhaze :( ] caesar's kits were named blackie, spiro and chestnut, and caesar was worried that they would get abused by brownie. dayhaze offered to take one, and caesar gave her chestnut. dayhaze brought chestnut back to camp, and lied that she had found the kit at the border. chestnutkit was allowed into shadowclan, and dayhaze took care of her most of the time. dayhaze then became an elder, when she left the clan to be with caesar. stonepaw became stonefeather, and dayhaze rose blackie and spiro with caesar, until she died in her sleep from old age.

soo... what happened to brownie

does he die

what about the other two kits- actually, what about all the kits? what happens to them and what is chestnut's warrior name 👀

also- what kind of name is blackie? this makes me feel less bad about having a cat named kitty and being accomplice to naming my sister's cat ginger which is depressing

ANyway how is she out here not eating for a month and still alive

also, how does no one in shadowclan care that's she's disappearing four times a month to be her illegal gay self? consistently once a week is a lot

having the cat be a former show cat is something i've personally not seen before- i'm not sure if anybody in real life would abandon a show quality cat though, they probably cost a lot of money

8 out of 10

cause of death :: old age (13 years at death)

interesante, most people go for sickness or wounds .-.

for once, someone gets to die peacefully-

2 out of 2

disabilities :: n/a

not graded

additional information :: she hated brownie and wanted to feed him deathberries; she never knew her sister, claudia, well

not graded

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total: 34 out of 50

no strong need for alteration, per se, but find out how she doesn't die alone in the wilderness, not get kicked out for sneaking to see her lover four times a month, and become a medicine cat while not having an... orthodox? relationship with starclan- that's more story stuff than oc stuff tho

also, you'll have to expand on her personality and everyone's appearances :v make them longer than one-liners smh, add more detail and you'll be fine