For @wintersnow999

Name: Peregrine

Peregrine is a canon name, she's mentioned as a member of the Copper Winglet of JMA. However I don't think she ever actually shows up so it doesn't matter really? It's a pretty good name. Very SkyWing-y

Gender: Female

Ok

Tribe: Skywing

I like SkyWings

Rank: Assassin and spy for the Queen

I like assassin ocs. I also like spy ocs. Good

Resides: wherever, has a den in the mountains of the Sky Kingdom

Okay fair enough

Appearance: Lithe and elegant. Thin and very strong. Sharp white teeth and claws. Deep, vivid red scales with pale sandy yellow-gold underbelly scales. Gold scale accents, edges, and horns. Long tail. Long, thinnish legs, fiery golden-yellow eyes with even better eyesight than the rest of her tribe. Quite young for her status. Unusually hot scales-not like Peril, but hot enough to surprise and unnerve her opponents when fighting

Very descriptive! I like the warm scales (a bit like a SandWing, maybe) and the golden scales are cool and really underused in SkyWings. (And according to the wiki, yes, they can have gold scales, which I somehow didn't know) This is good I like it a lot

Personality: Brave, very loyal, fast, powerful and deadly, stands up for friends no matter what but is vicious and cold to strangers. Even temper and calm but can be hostile when needed, kills fast and causes little pain but can cause a lot when commanded. She is very well trained in fighting. Very good flyer. Very good with words and has very well-developed comeback skills.

Very very

This is good, she seems like a typical assassin. Nothing really special.. reminds me of Peril. I really love the "good with words" that is very underused in ocs.

Family: She killed them because she only saw her parents when she was very young and can only remember faint, loving figures. She was commanded to kill them, not knowing that they were her family. When she found out, she never got over it. It's one of her very few weak spots, but almost no one knows about it.

Like Tsunami killing Gill a little bit?? If that was a spoiler then too bad if you haven't read the second book yet just leave

(Jk)

Mate: None. She can't help remembering her parents and their deaths and would never let a young dragonet live with that kind of guilt if she had dragonets or if that dragonet did what she had done.
Dragonets: None. Read above.

Fair enough. I'd probably feel the same way.

Backstory: If you pick through the other info I put here, you should be able to find sufficient information for a backstory.

Yeah you kinda scattered it around the whole form. It's a bit.. confusing

Overall

9/10. I like her, she's good, but the backstory man. I want to know why she didn't know her parents or why she was commanded to kill them? When did she become an assassin? Idk