For ohmyjackal

*This is an updated version of Sculptor! He was rated before, but I want to see the rating of the updated version!*

Alright! I'm excited to see how he has improved!

Name; Sculptor

I still find this name a bit odd, but I like it. You also explained more in his backstory, which is good.

Gender; Male

Ok

Tribe; NightWing

Idk what to say here's a picture

Rank in tribe; Healer

I don't see healers very often. Cool, cool.

Residence; the Rainforest, but he will travel to different tribes for short periods of time to help with dragons in serious medial need.

Ok, makes sense. I like it!

Appearance; Sculptor is a light shade of black with numerous white spots that resemble stars all over him. On the underside of his left wing, he has a pattern of stars that is similar to the faint southern sky constellation, Sculptor. He has dark amethyst purple eyes and two very dark black spots under his right eye that are barely visible. He is on the skinnier side due to tending more to others than himself, and he is smaller than the average NightWing. He has a string necklace with a single opal hanging from it.

What is a light shade of black? Gray?

Anyway, you've added his body shape and jewelry! A small addition, but it goes a long way. I can picture him much better in my head now. This is a nice appearance. I still like the constellation on his wing, it's really original.

Personality; Sculptor is very gentle. He shows empathy for everyone, no matter how good or evil. He always sees the good in dragons. He can get frustrated, and when he gets frustrated, that leads to almost giving up and getting a bit of an attitude. Once he's frustrated, he doesn't have the power to calm himself down, which is why he has his sister, Lyra to help him calm down. He devotes so much time to taking care of everyone else that he doesn't have enough time to take care of himself. He is also a very fast learner.

I see you removed the "calm and patient" bit from his personality that I pointed out before. That's good. Otherwise, though, this is exactly the same. That's fine; I like his personality, it's quite original and fits his job well, but I was expecting a bit more is all. Oh well.

Family; his mother, Aquila, his father, Keiran and his sister, Lyra

Okay. I like the weird names and the explanation you give for them.

Backstory; Sculptor's family was born outside of the NightWing tribe, which is why they have unusual names. Aquila was the daughter of an exiled dragon and Keiran was raised by a SandWing. Keiran and Aquila ran into each other, and it was love at first sight. Aquila had never gone back to the NightWing tribe, so she hatched Sculptor and Lyra outside of the tribe, too. She soon gave them to the NightWing tribe after Keiran had died from a horrible disease because she couldn't take care of dragonets on her own. Sculptor had always wanted to be a healer ever since his father died of disease. He watched as the NightWing healers helped injured and sick dragons, which sparked his interest more every time. As soon as he began training as a healer, his mentor saw something special in him. Something... unordinary. He had the power to automatically tell what was wrong with the patient. Sculptor didn't really understand where it came from, until he realized that the necklace that his mother gave him was animus-touched. It was definitely convenient, Sculptor admitted, but sometimes it could lead to Sculptor feeling very guilty. Yes, he could tell what was wrong with them, but like any healer, he can't always fix them. His worst memory was when he had a SandWing patient that had some sort of virus injected in her. As the dragon suffered, Sculptor was unable to figure out how to get rid of the virus. He tried everything he could, but he couldn't decipher the virus itself. When the dragon died, he was blamed by many dragons of SandWing tribe for her death. He gets nervous around extremely sick dragons because of that event, but he still tries his best to heal the dragon. Sculptor is well known throughout all of the dragon tribes, and is one of the most trusted healers in all of them. He will stay in a tribe for short periods of times to stay with a patient and help them through whatever was going on until the patient is well enough to take care of itself.

Alright! The bit of backstory you gave his parents is.. okay. It does help clear some things up, like their odd names. But then, it raises even more questions, like why Aquila's parent was exiled and why Keiran was raised by SandWings. It's great that you explained his power, but now I'm curious as to how Aquila came into possession of an animus object, and why it was enchanted to have such a specific purpose.

Overall
I give Sculptor an 8/10. That's actually a lower score than what I gave him last time, but don't get me wrong! He's definitely improved. I've just become stricter in my reviews because I think that I give better advice that way. I think that his appearance and personality are good. His backstory is too, but you could explain a few things. I don't expect you to tell me every little detail, but they're just things to keep in mind. His personality hasn't changed much, which I find a little disappointing. It's still good, but I expected it to have gotten even better. It's been quite a while since I rated him before. But oh well, I'm rambling now, goodbye