Tea

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For @DoodleDragon55

Name: Tea (very strange)

Well, you're right about this being strange. Do dragons even drink tea? I think it's a cute and original name, though. I actually kind of like it, but I'm not sure if it works.

Gender: female ( so very rare)

Wow

Tribe: SeaWing

My other favorite!

Rank: Animus

Does she have royal blood? I'm not sure when your story takes place, but all known SeaWing animuses (animi?) have been royalty since at least Darkstalker's times..

Residence: The beach (she doesn't like other dragons much)

Okay.

Appearance: Darkish Cyan (main), Dark blue (crest), light teal (patterns), pale blue (eyes), Always wears her pouch and teabag earring.

The teabag earring is really cute imo, it's unique. I don't think cyan, teal, and dark blue go together? I think you should stick to mostly darker colors or mostly lighter colors, it would make a more reasonable color palette. And, I'd like to know more than just her scale colors. I say this all the time; body shape. Height. Weight. I want to know this stuff!

Personality: Shy, yet cranky, don't touch her fricking tea, Anti- social.

I think you mean asocial (dislikes being around people) not anti-social. Just letting you know because a lot of people get that mixed up :3

I like what you have so far, but there isn't much here. I'm not able to really tell if I like her personality, because I don't have much to go off of.

Family: A father named Gar , and a Mother named Seal, her superior brother is named Starfish, her other brother is named Sand (so very boring)

Cool names.

Backstory: she discovered her power by finding driftwood and she got an idea to t tell it to become a cup of tea, and it worked, earning her name. Made fun of by her brothers. Decent artist.

Why did she just randomly decide to tell a piece of driftwood to turn into tea? Is she crazy?

This is a really short backstory. Like her personality, there isn't much to judge her off of. I can't really see a story being made out of this, because there's just so little?

Maybe Tea should be like, a nickname, and not her actual name. Her parents had no idea that she would like tea when she hatched, but it would make more sense if she got a nickname when she decided to randomly turn some driftwood into tea. Idk.

Other: 12yrs

Alright

Overall
I'll give Tea a 5/10. I like her little obsession with tea, I think it's cute. But the name is odd, it doesn't really work. I'm given very little to work with in the personality and backstory, so I feel like I don't really have enough information to judge her well. She definitely seems like a WIP. The tea thing has good potential, you could make a great character out of this because it is a pretty original idea, but so far she is pretty bland.

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