For @Mikyle888

Name: Anorak (French for winter jacket)

I think this name is really cute! I don't know if it would work, because I don't think any dragons speak French? Idk though. It is an interesting name, though.

Gender: Male

Ok

Tribe: Icewing

My favorite!

Rank: Gaurd (protects like a winter jacket)

I like that his name matches his rank lol

Residence Ice Palace (second circle)

Good, makes sense

Appearance: a gray blue with a light blue as webbing for the wings. almost white spikes on tail are more plentiful and longer than average spikes along back are shorter underbelly same as wings and jet black eyes.

This is good.. it fits an IceWing well, and it's not too common. Gray blue is kind of unpopular for IceWings. I like the detail about his spikes, but you could still be more descriptive. His height, body shape, etc are left out.

Personality: Warm personality but can be very stubborn and refuses to take advice from anyone except queen glacier

Hmm. This is very short, I can kind of get an idea of his personality but not really? You could add some more personality traits, both good and bad. Also some things that he likes or dislikes, just so that he seems more.. developed?

Backstory: He is very close with his family as he is a night guard and sleeps on his shifts occasionally since not much attacks the ice palace at night. He is very stubborn because once he took a fellow guards advice on how to fight and almost got killed he fights primarily with his tail now.

I like that you say why he is stubborn. He doesn't really have a long backstory, though. I'm just not sure how you could make a fanfiction from this? Assuming that's what you want to do. Eh. Idk, he seems pretty boring without a backstory..

Family:Mother Beluga Father north wind and younger sister snowhare

Cute names! I like Snowhare

Overall
I'll give Anorak a 6/10. He seems very underdeveloped, like you haven't put much thought into this character. You should definitely add more to his appearance, personality and backstory. As for what you have, I don't dislike it. His name is cute (even if it doesn't really work) and I like that you give meaning to his stubborn personality trait. The detail about his spikes is very nice. I don't think you should change what you already have.. just add to it, its very short.