Shadowwalker @Dawnstar16

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Name: ShadowwalkerAge: 27 yearsGender: FemaleTribe: NightWing

First Full night wing! ^.^

Appearance: Shadow is a jet black NightWing with a dark grey underbelly and dark purple wing membranes. She has the typical star-like markings as well as a silver necklace with a jade pendant and small silver hoop earrings. Shadow also has a long scar that stretched down her left forearm.Abilities: Breath fire, flight, blends into shadows very well, assassin skillsOccupation: Mercenary Assassin

Cool! I haven't had an assassin yet, and That job is aesome!, and uncommon for OCs(that Iknow of, correct me if i'm wrong)

Residency: Medium sized cave that leads to a cave system. Here's an excerpt from Veiled Twilight that describes her home.The NightWing assassin set her twin daggers in their hiding spot and glanced around the cave. Large torches hung from the wall sconces, the flames licking the air. On the stone floor, a large, round, grey rug with white stars sewn in lay in the center of the wide area. To her left, she spotted the large cot she slept in. There was a stone lip above the cot, which provided shadows along the side of the wall, allowing the NightWing to blend in and hide if needed.Cool! Family:Mother: Stargazer lol I have a night wing Of named Stargazer!Status: AliveOccupation: ScribeFather: ShadowkeeperStatus: UnknownOccupation: UnknownBrother: AshStatus: AliveRank: GuardBrother: ShattereddreamsStatus: DeceasedRank: GuardBackstory: Shadowwalker was born into a small family. She grew up with her two brothers, Ash and Shattereddreams. As she grew older, Shadow noticed that she was different from her family. Her brothers were always talking with their friends and training together. She soon began training in self-defense and ways to attack others if the need arose on her own.When Shadow was 20 years old, she left the NightWing kingdom through the tunnel and explored. She was exploring the edge of the SkyWing territory when a guard came at her from the shadows and attacked her. She was able to kill him, but not before he managed to slash her wing, which resulted in a long, nasty scar. Shadow grew to enjoy attacking enemies and soon found herself as an assassin.On an assignment near the SandWing's palace, Shadowwalker attacked a SandWing known as Sidewinder. He attacked her but refrained from using his venomous barb. She stared at his green eyes before quickly leaving, excusing the mission all together. That dragon turned out to be the only friend Shadow would gain through her work. They grew closer until they finally trusted one another completely. While Shadow still went off on assignments, she would visit Sidewinder as often as she could.Other:Fact-Shadowwalker was named after her father.Theme Song- Fit for Survival

Nice that you added a theme song!


Good:

Shadowwalker is great! Good backstory description,  and I likethatyou have an older dragon too. I've only seen 1 assassin Of, not counting Shadowwalker! I think its also really cool that you added a theme song!  

Bad: 

the only flaw is that I didn't see a personality in there.. You probably forgot it though so I won't take any points off for that ^.^ 


Overall: 10\10

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