Name: DuskBloom 

Interesting name!

Age: 6

 Another young'n lol

Gender: female

Tribe: rainwing/nightwing 

I think this is my first hybrid! :D

Appearance: DuskBloom looks mostly like a nightwing but is slimmer like a rain wing, has a long curled non prehensile tail and has the rainwing frill, horns and venom spitting teeth. Her scales can't change colors but they are dark versions of colors such as blue purple green and a bit of yellow. She has bright green eyes and some random silver scales (like freckles all across her body). Cool!!

Personality: is kindhearted,mischievous at times can be a hot head and loves to make dragons laugh.

Abilities: has very slight prophecy powers but other than that just has venom.

Occupation:currently a student at jade mountain learning to become an architect.

Residency: lives with her adopted mother in the desert when not at jade mountain.

Family: her mother (a nightwing) dies when she was little and her father disowned her she had an unknown sister in the rainforest but other than that her main family is her adopted SandWing mother.

Backstory: her mother forgottenwings and father tree frog met when her mother was on a hunting trip in the rainforest at first they were wary of each other but after a while they soon fell in love and bore there first egg. Tree frog managed to convince her mother to put the egg safely with the rest of the rainwing eggs for safety. However with there seacond egg they weren't so lucky. After having cramps while flying through the desert with tree frog in there way back from possibility forgottenwings laid her seacond egg half in the glow of the two moons and half in shadow. They were found almost instantly by a SandWing partrol and were questioned on the spot. Tree Frog more concerned with saving his own scales claimed to have nothing to do with her and fled.Her mother however stood up for herself and ended up being killed and on stuffed display in burns weirdling tower. A couple months later a SandWing from possibility discovered her egg and adopted it. DuskBloom hatched underneath the false brightest night which caused her eyes to be green. Years later her adopted mother convinced her to attend jade mountain academy. Which she did and met lots of new friends and that's when her true story began. Sorry for the cheesy ending couldn't think of a good way to end her backstory without it being too long. Thanks again and sorry for any spelling/grammar mistakes along the way:).

Cool backstory!

Good: 

I love her description! It's really cool!Don't hate mnw if there are a lot, but iu don't think I've seen a lot of Rain/night hybrids, at least not as much as some of the other hybrids out there. Her backstory is interesting! Evenv though it is short, she has a good personailty

(Just something completely random tho: Ever noticed that ton backwards is not and not backwards if ton? Sorry just something I was thinking about XD)

Bad: 

 I do like her backstory, but I think you should add a little bit more info on Duskbloom's sister. What happened to her? Duskbloom's personality also needs a little bit of work.it is good, but it is also very short, and I think you can add a little more personality to her character.

Overall: 8.5/10

Yay! My first hybrid!!(maybe my 2nd but I'm counting it as my first)Duskbloom ids a really great OC, but I think her personality and backstory needs a little work

ALSO PLEASE REMEMBER YTIU DON'T HAVE TO LISTEN TO THEVREVEIW UF YOU DOIN'T LIKE IT.YOU DON'THAVE TO CJANGE YOUE OC BECAUSE SOMEONE TELLS YOU TPO. IF YOU THINK YOU SHKULD, THEN FO AHWAD, IF NOT, ThEN DON'T

Hey guys!!!!! I apologize for not updating.. I've been really busy with school and life and other stuff, so I haven't even been on Wattpad in 3 weeks, but i'll try to do a lot better!!!!!