Sparkseed @Pheonix_The_Hybrid

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Name: Spark SeedAge: 21 dragon years

An older dragon, nice!

Gender: female (sorry if there are alot of females >~<)

It'd oki ^.^ no points a taken off for gender

Tribe: CrystalWing- range in many colors, some even two different but are very rare, wings grow crystals along the spine that shed every spring and regrow.

That's cool!!

Flowing medium length manes and semme-spiked tailes, breathe fire that's the color of their crystal, main body colors range from reds to light greens.Eye colors depend on time of day they started life, so if night as example, they would have glowing green, yellow, or cyan eyes, if day, they range from deep brown to dark green.

Thatt's awesome!


Appearence: light build, average weight with orange-yellow mane. Glowing cyan eyes and red-orange crystals glowing on spine of wings, has a couple scars littering her body from previous fights.Personality: due to her emotionless Appearence she doesn't have many friends, she can be a real sweetheart once you get to know her.

Aww.. We need to get her some friends! Stargazer would love to be her friend :D

Abilities: flight, breath orange-yellow fire.Occupation: loner.Residency: underground cave with moon pool.Family: unknown-abandoned as childBackground: she was abandoned a couple months after hatching for unknown reasons. she was on her own for a while, till she was found by some forest critters who took her in out of pity. She was raised by them for a while till they though she was old enough to live on her own, she still visits some of the critters who are still alive due to them being like family to this day.


Good:

Crystalwings are really unique, I love them!  I love how their eye colors are determined by when they hatch!Spark seed is also very interesting! Her cave home seems really nice! 



Bad:

Sparkseed doesn't really have a very descriptive backstory or personality..   What are some more flaws and good  in her personality? Is she too sweet that she can very very gullable or talked into almost anything to please dragons? Is she a really friendly dragon to almost  anyone? For her backstory, some ways you can improve is to add some more details. What does she do now,  other than being a loner? You mentioned scars in her appearance from fights. Maybe add some more backstory for some of those in there? 


Overall:  6/10 


I always hate giving lower scores, and I'm really really sorry about it, but Spark seed doesn't really have much of a background or a personality.. 

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