So I copy pasted Chapter 2, a 2000 word count chapter and my husband edited it to represent "an actual male POV".

He got it down to 300 words and even gave the story an ending!

I'll delete this in a couple of days but here you go!

Zayne

Naina is in lingerie. Hot!

She approaches me and my jaw drops.

I ask her which side she wants to sleep. She is silent. I take the right. Her dumb cousins have placed condoms and hand towels at bedside.

"What are the towels for?" I ask her.

"It's for when the groom takes the bride's virginity, so that the sheets don't get bloody," she says.
That's dumb the dumbest shit I've heard.

I see she is crying.

"It's okay, Naina, we are going to be okay," I tell her.
"Do you still love him?"

"I do. I still love Advik," she says.

I hate Advik but I also want to kick her for loving that jerk. But I'm a nice guy so I let her sleep.

I remember how she called me when her wedding with him was called off. The asshole had beaten her to a pulp. If I ever get my hands on him!

I pray to God and slip in beside her. She's hot. I fantasize about her while she sleeps next to me.

We take turns in the bathroom. When I come out she looks hot wearing something pink and I can't stop oggling at her.

"So machaan, how was your first night?" asks her crazy sister Nishita as we sat down to eat.

"It was good," I say. I'm hungry and can't think of anything but food.

Everyone giggles. Oh God! How immature.

"No, I meant I slept well. The bed was... comfortable." More giggles. I roll my eyes.

"The appam and egg roast tastes really good! Did you make it, aunty?" I ask Naina's mother. The food's really good at Naina's house. I could live here forever.

Okay, I'm bored now. Naina and Zayne eat a lot of food. Naina learns how to cook properly from her mom coz she is currently not so good at it.
Naina and Zayne have loads of fun in and out of the bedroom and live happily ever after.

Oh and Advik ends up in the psych ward. Forever. In a straight jacket.

The end.