Author: FuzzyZombieUnicorn

Summary: "Juliets whole life has been turned upside down, and it's about to get worse. Moving halfway across the world she finds herself thrown into the middle of a nightmare that has come alive. Someone or something is attacking the residents of small town Nylstroom, and Juliet wants answers. But she's not asking for the right questions..."

Reviewer's remarks: The cover and the description were very intriguing, but the story has disappointed me.

I'd like to point out that first three chapters of the story tells nothing to the reader - 1st chapter is explaining why the story MIGHT be bad, 2nd chapter is Copy Right Policy although all of wattpad works are being secured by that policy unless the author doesn't want it (It could be added to the 1st chapter) and 3rd chapter is only a one sentence. I don't know how any of these chapters fits into the story that I was going to read.

Another problem that I'd like to point out is the details. The writer tells too much about the main characters life - all basic moves. It almost leaves no place for readers imagination. Yes, basic movements can be mentioned in the story, but there's always a line that the writer shouldn't cross.

Although the characters monologue and her feelings are being expressed very well - her feelings look very natural and usual in such situations.

Rating (out of five): 3

A note to the author: I saw that you want to get your book published someday. There aren't a lot of problems although the plot looks a bit basic (reminds me of few TV series like "Scream" or "Teen Wolf"), but the main problem that just kept annoying me in you being very detailed. There's no need for reader to know that she sits on her bed and etc! It's not major stuff and reader can imagine that by himself! Also fix the introduction of the book because it's too long. Usually all the writer has is a description, but you expanded your description into even 3 chapters out of 11.

Reviewer: Alan247