Author: DoveReign

Summary: "There's an old saying: If you meet a person three times, it's not coincidence; it's fate.

When karma's right hand woman, Alexandria Heath, bumps into the arrogant Jared Woods, a new meaning of the term crazy comes to light. Absolute pandemonium ensues when one bet leads to them challenging each other at every chance. Amidst pranks, evil plans and night escapades, they realize that they may not be so different from each other after all. But, an enemy from the past changes it all. All too soon, they're facing their deepest fears and having their limits pushed. One wrong move and they may just lose...

But to win a war, you have to make sacrifices. What exactly are they willing to give up when they are confronted? And will they come out of this game unscratched? After all, third time's a charm."

Reviewer's remarks:

Once I've read the description I thought that it gives out about the story too much and it does! The first chapters of the book weren't interesting for me to read because I already knew what will happen next. It's like I was reading a story that I already saw somewhere before.

Secondly, the writer seems like a very nice person - his/her note before the story to me was even more interesting than the story. The stories plot is very predictable and there are very less mystery. The story itself is a basic story - there are a lot of "Bad Boy V Good Girl" stories and I already know how the story ends without even reading the first chapter - they defeat the evil friend and live happily ever after - what a shocker.

Although the writer is talented - she/he definitely know how to write some good scenes that are interesting to read and doesn't crosses the line between telling too much and telling too less.

Yes, it could be me hating all these cliche stories on wattpad, but I think that the writer needs to find his/hers own writting style. At the moment it feels like she/he is just swimming downstream the river without trying to swim upstream and I don't feel like the story is unique.

Rating (out of five): 1

A note to the author: I just didn't feel the urge to read more of your story, it hadn't interested me at all and I just read it because I had to. There's a whole wattpad full of such stories!!! Some of the people make such stories unique by adding slang or humor to it and you need to find what fits for you the best. Your writing style is good, but your plot (I don't know about the others, but to me it) sucks. Also, you use "all after" or "after all" in the description too much.

Reviewer: Alan247