Author: @Pacmantacco

Summary: "Lily's summer vacation plans get screwed over by a magical space prince from a faraway world."

Reviewer's remarks: First of all, I would Like to note the writers originality - I haven't seen any book like this on wattpad and I even have read very less of books with similar plot. For a love story that is being appealed to teenagers the writer got away from the basics and still interested the reader to read the story.

Secondly, the writer ends the chapters on a cliff-hanger. Like let's look at the first chapter. The whole situation was going very natural and common and only one last sentence has ruined it all (in a good way). It's so fascinating how writer has setup the situation that the last sentence wouldn't feel out of the spot.

Although everything looks just fine, from action scenes to common dialogue, there is one problem. The mystery. The writer almost tells the book plot in the description (let me guess, the girl falls in love with a guy, they face some problems and then live happily ever after). It's made very obvious that the guy and the girl are falling in love - the writer mainly focuses on it. He/she adds very less other characters and if she/he does add them the girl and the guy gets to meet them almost at the same time (like the fish-man). It's like I'm reading ONLY about the girls and the guys relationships and not exploring their own personal lives (let's agree, although we fell in love with someone doesn't mean that we turn away from other persons that we know. We might introduce our lover to out friends, but we still have and personal life besides love).

Rating (out of five): 5

A note to the author: Well... You know how to write - that's for sure. Your chapters looks very structured and well-written. The problem that I mentioned above is small, although it's noticeable. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Alan247