MYSTERY/HORROR/PARANORMAL

Last Fall by aiceleste

Cover - 10/ 10 points

Detail/Description - 9/20 points

Characters Depth - 12/ 30 points

Plot - 20/40

Total = 41 points/100

Interest 4/5

Hadley reveal in chapter 3 causes such curiosity and a great cliffhanger. The read didn't feel too slow. The opening is suspenseful! Work on describing more details.

Brian Saves The World, Maybe by gladhaven

Cover 10/10

Detail/Description - 9/20 points

Characters Depth - 25/ 30 points

Plot - 27/40

Total = 71 points/100

Interest 5/5

Memory loss from a strange encounter grabs the reader in fast. Brian is lost, as the readers are, and has a visitor inside his head. Very different, very twilight zone.

Mountain Falls by jgblodgett26

Cover 5/10

Detail/Description - 15/20 points

Characters Depth - 27/ 30 points

Plot - 30/40

Total = 77 points/100

Interest 4/5

Description should be grouped together not shifted down into its own sentence. Since the story is a screenplay, it's simple but impactful. Nina and James are adorable while house shopping. Montages need to be showed in words, not listed as if it's a note to remind the author. The climax happens fast which is alarming and unexpected, the injury that Nina takes has changed her to something evil?

Catalyst by Loneaka

Cover: 7/10

Detail/Description - 17/20 points

Characters Depth - 26/ 30 points

Plot - 20/40

Total = 70 points/100

Interest 4/5

What has Regan Hank stumbled into? A ship wreck by a seemingly ghost submarine that holds creatures? The description needs to be grouped as one, not shifted down for no reason. Details of the environment are okay.

Speak Of The Devil by Iskipp_U

Cover 10/10

Detail/Description - 14/20 points

Characters Depth - 14/ 30 points

Plot - 35/40

Total = 73 points/100

Interest 5/5

An interesting take on an archangel, especially Lucifer, who takes a dead mans life to live on earth. More environmental description is needed.

Superficial by Emma_bridges

Cover 3/10

Detail/Description - 10/20 points

Characters Depth - 24/ 30 points

Plot - 28/40

Total = 65 points/100

Interest 4/5

The story has a Freaky Friday feel and is unexpected and unique. Work on description and details more.

FANFIC

Love Me Please by laynejodi

Cover 10/10

Detail/Description - 16/20 points

Characters Depth - 22/ 30 points

Plot - 30/40

Total = 78 points/100

Interest 4/5

A sweet, experimental and sexual awaking of two guys friends desiring one another unexpectedly. (NAMSOON + HEUNGSOO)

Priceless by Starelf555

Cover 10/10

Detail/Description - 22/20 points

Characters Depth - 26/ 30 points

Plot - 40/40

Total = 98/100

Interest 5/5

Billy is an outcast, and shows that big girls still struggle and feel depressed over guys not wanting them. Her home life is a tragedy as well. I feel Ashley  is overshadowing her in the second chapter, as the main character. The description is okay. (BLACK VEIL BRIDES)

Blast From The Past by i8pizza2night

Cover 6/10

Detail/Description - 10/20 points

Characters Depth - 18/ 30 points

Plot - 32/40

Total = 66/100

Interest 3/5

A very different fanfic, with magic and genies added to the mix, along with humor. Structure is bad, it is too separated, actions and thoughts do not need their own lines. Work on description. (NINJAGO)

Ekusoshisuto by Lunathecutegamer

Cover 10/10

Detail/Description - 18/20 points

Characters Depth - 27/ 30 points

Plot - 40/40

Total = 95/100

Interest 5/5

Demons and curses within this fanfic is very cool, it even has a horror element. I like that the main character has two mothers, and a strong, inspiring brother. The structure is very problematic, please group passages together properly. Work on description. (BLUE EXORCIST, ANIME)

Change Is Possible by Dancegirl134

Cover 5/10

Detail/Description - 15/20 points

Characters Depth - 30/ 30 points

Plot - 40/40

Total = 90/100

Interest 3/5

The build up of chapters one and two are typical, there needs to be some uniqueness. The concept is neat, BTS being vampires was unexpected. The roleplay for the readers is cool too. It seems that many books on Wattpad separate every single line of dialogue and action, this is a bad habit. Please improve it. (BTS, NCT)

Kaiba's Prostitute by KariRakitan

Cover 4/10

Detail/Description -15/20 points

Characters Depth -20/ 30 points

Plot -30/40

Total = 69/100

Interest 3/5

Very daring and edgy. Marc is sweet, and Seto is rude. Joan is smart, and is written well enough to not think low of her being a sex worker. The interactions between the three feels natural. The open relationship theme is very interesting and isn't seen much on Wattpad. Description is okay. (KAIBA, ANIME)

My Hot CEO by MyPuppyPrince

Cover 10/10

Detail/Description -11/20 points

Characters Depth - 23/ 30 points

Plot - 40/40

Total = 84/100

Interest 5/5

Tense, sexy, and funny. Jimin's new jobs comes with a difficult boss, Jungkook, who he has an attractive to, and a funny and snappy relationship with. The structure is good. Grammar needs work. (JUNGKOOK, JIMIN)