CHICK-LIT/LGBTQ

Two-Way Street by shashi1903

The plot is more original than most, with the different dynamics of the teens and opposite lifestyles intervening. There is drama, adorable moments, uncertainty, and mystery as well, and starting the story off with a lonely girl is very relatable. Please work on describing more.

Cover - 8/ 10 points

Detail/Description - 14/20 points

Characters Depth - 27/ 30 points

Plot - 32/40

Total = 81/100

Interest 4/5

Teaching Sin By Suzidebeer

Good description! The story is very intense and unexpected! Sydney has mental issues, abandonment issues, and trauma from her past. Her mother left her, and now she's meeting half siblings who aren't as stable either. This story is very sad, emotional, and sweet, but gives awareness as well. Sin is done by those who are wronged.

Cover - 4/ 10 points

Detail/Description - 20/20 points

Characters Depth - 30/ 30 points

Plot - 35/40

Total = 89/100

Interest 5/5

Thin Blue Line By EysWrites

A homeschooled, Christian, militant boy whose gay, but doesn't know it and does what his parents would want instead of being himself. The opening was very touching in an emotional way. Gabriel is like a robot being controlled to do what's expected. He's surrounded by such harsh, homophobic people, his parents, his girlfriend...how will he deal with living his gay lifestyle. DRAMA!! Then Gabe being an officer is even more of a mind blow....plus the boy on boy flirting!! You're descriptions are bare minimum, try to make the reader feel the actual environment.

Cover - 10/ 10 points

Detail/Description - 16/20 points

Characters Depth - 30/ 30 points

Plot -40/40

Total = 93/100

Interest 5/5

Touch In The Dark By wickedreamer_21

Wording is odd at points and choppy, please edit. Two boys as roommates, who have sexual attraction towards one another. Yet they are confused, and lead totally different lives, a normal life versus a violent life. I'm wonder if Tan and Rune will be able to work out. Work on describing more details.

Cover - 10/ 10 points

Detail/Description - 10/20 points

Characters Depth - 20/ 30 points

Plot - 20/40

Total =60/100

Interest 3/5

Dead Boys By Hannah_lemon_meh

Bellamy needs help, he gets bullied so bad that he has to change schools. Just for being gay. His parents are so accepting. The new school is nicer..only because it's not known that he's gay. A Dark and mysterious boy attracts everyone to be honest. Bellamy needs to be careful around the mystery boy, he seems suspicious and dangerous.

Cover - 10/ 10 points

Detail/Description - 9/20 points

Characters Depth - 15/ 30 points

Plot - 30/40

Total =64/100

Interest 3/5

Vote The Bitch For Prom Queen By Iskipp_U

Separate your dialogues please, also improve your description, it's not as good as it could be. The opening was exhilarating, and grabbed my attention. Emily is not your typical lead girl, she's reckless with a slutty reputation. The story reminds me of the movie Easy A.

Cover - 10/ 10 points

Detail/Description - 13/20 points

Characters Depth - 18/30 points

Plot - 20/40

Total =61/100

Interest 3/5

After I Fall By CourtneyPeterman0

An army wife dealing with a selfish, bitter, and broken man who happens to also be carrying his child. Abbey is unhappy, unsure of being a mother and scared to do pregnancy alone while her husband goes to war. The argument that the couple has is so natural and feel like something a man and woman would say, great writing! This story also touches on the mental state war puts men into. Improve your description.

Cover - 5/ 10 points

Detail/Description - 17/20 points

Characters Depth - 25/30 points

Plot - 33/40

Total = 80/100

Interest 4/5

Zanilla By heartofemotion

What an opening chapter!, not a drag and very informative and connected. Zanilla world is changed for good now, she must be strong and avenge her parents by going after the Scars, a merciless, murderous gang. This reminds me of Mulan, but with gore and more realism. Chu Feng is the best partner in crime ever! Is that rude guy a love interest? Your description could be more visual.

Cover - 10/ 10 points

Detail/Description - 16/20 points

Characters Depth - 28/30 points

Plot - 36/40

Total = 90/100

Interest 5/5