So i Don't know how to continue this story :p so my mind told me 'why not make this a one shot?' So I'm changing everything! And starting a new chapter called

A mix of fate

So yeah let's start!

Author's pov.

There once live a chieftain in a village in the province of pulau rintis. He had a daughter named yaya who was not only beautiful but was also kind -- to rich and poor alike.

Because of yaya's beauty and kindness, she had many suitors who vied for her love. The suitor she fell in love with was a young named boboiboy. His father was one of the fighters of yaya's father. Since boboiboy was not noble birth, yaya's father did not favor of him as a suitor of her daughter. But this did not prevent her from accepting boboiboy.

Another of yaya's suitors was fang, a son of another chieftain who ruled a neighboring village. He was overbearing and boastful and because his parents were rich and powerful, yaya's father favored him along all the suitors. Yaya was not happy over her father's decision. She went to boboiboy and told him about it. So the two lovers thought of by,they might solve the problem.

After considering the matter for some time, yaya and boboiboy decided that the best solution to the problem was to elope. They agreed on a certain date for carrying their plan, yaya told her lover that on the night of the appointed date, he should wait for her near the river.

The lovers didn't know that fang was able to learn of their plan Without delay, fang went to yaya's father and informed him of what yaya and boboiboy intended to do. 

On the night of the appointed date, boboiboy returned and, as agreed upon, he waited yaya near the river. No sooner had the two lovers met than the men of yaya's father went after them.

Upon seeing the group of men approaching them, yaya and boboiboy run as fast as they could to the forest. But since it was dark and they couldn't see very well boboiboy used his fire element power to light up there path but it was too late  her father's men had arrived and overtaken them. One warrior acted recklessly and attacked boboiboy, the warrior accidentally triggered his crossbow and was aiming for yaya but boboiboy saved yaya by taking the hit and instantly died...

Yaya, upon seeing her lover fall, she  grieved and with tears flowing down her face, she continued to run, she got tired and decided to fly but she got entangled in a thorny bush which was abode of fierce and poisonous snakes. Without hesitation the snakes bit yaya the men found yaya and immediately gave her medicine but despite all the efforts of the men to save yaya, she died

Yaya's father grieved over his own daughters death, and he and his men buried her, along side of boboiboy and head back to the village with despair...

The end...

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