This Amazing Book was written by KaylaLoluna

I absolutely loved your summary, I don't think u could have explained the story any better.

Loved the description of Jessie on the Prologue, definitely makes me wanna read it even more.

I'm already in love with Jessie character, not only you describe her as a Badass demon killer with freaking Awesome fire power (whoa!!) but she is also very funny, I'm loving this!!

Your writing style is really good, I love the way you describe the story and the characters emotions, only point and this is something I do often is the paragraphs size, I understand some readers on Wattpad complain about this because they read often on a phone, so just an advice.

You really created the best characters, I absolutely love Jessie, Hunter and Kate, love their chemistry and it works so well.

I'm completely hooked to the story and I can relate to Jessie a lot, not the Fire thing (dang it!!) and I also hate hate Mondays so yeah totally get it!!

This story is one of the best fantasy books I've read here, it's really between a teen fic and fantasy to me, but it has a tremendous potential, it's really amazing.

You are very good at describing things, I was impressed by chapter 5 and that birdie...you leave your readers think and wonder which is a big plus for every writer I believe.

Storyline is really Exceptional Amazing, is nothing you should change or could have done better, on the writing style I would strongly recommend You to make the paragraphs smaller.

You have an amazing book and in my opinion is an amazing story and I hope it's placed on the right genre because this book deserves votes and reads.

I wish you the best of luck and keep doing the amazing job

The Best of Luck,
Claudushka