Book: A Retelling of SwaRagini - Book 1

Author: dollylisha2002

Reviewer: Praahi

About the story:

A Retelling of Swaragini is a story based on the serial cast of Swaragini with a different plot from that was telecasted in the serial. It starts with Ragini joining a school where Swara and Sanskar are known to be the loveliest couple of the school. Ragini instantly likes Sanskar and somehow he too gets inclined towards her but Swara deeply loves Sanskar. Now, to know the destiny of three lives, you must read this story.

*It is an ongoing story with 12 published parts.

Review:

- The cover is beautiful and attractive with all the the protagonists with various emotions. The font used on the cover is appropriate adding to the beauty.

- The title is apt as the story is based on the serial Swaragini but in author's point of view making it a retell of the serial.

- The language is simple and easy to understand.

- Prologue or description is good but is well understood only by those who watched the serial Swaragini because it has only questions regarding the characters and their behavior in the serial. It would have been better if written in a generalized way, for suppose giving a brief of the actual story of the serial and then giving those bits to show how it would be different from the actual story.

- I loved the character description where the edits of each character were posted along with two lines describing everything about them. They were beautiful and unique.

- Coming to the plot, though it seems to be a triangle love story or something related to revenge, the way the author presented it with a tinge of suspense adding to it at the end of every chapter making it more interesting. There are very few stories which I want to continue reading even after reviewing it, and this one would be in the top of the list.

- The tense is perfectly maintained all through the story and hardly there were any grammatical errors. Though I found few typos and punctuation mistakes, Capitalization of nouns which could be corrected by proof-reading. for suppose, 

Instead of this "Breathless ?" 

Try "Breathless?", that gap looks odd and is not needed. Just a suggestion though.

Instead of "Oh...Just in time..." uttara says as she points over to a certain person.

Try "Oh...Just in time...", said Uttara pointing over to a certain person. 

Best Things:

- The unique character description.

- The story narration style.

- The beautiful cover.

Note: Hope I was not harsh dear. Reading your stories, I felt you are one of the amazing writers and I would be glad if this review helps you to become the best.

Thank you,

Praahi

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