For @FireWolf_Under. Next oc will be Smokefeather.

Name:Berryfall

I'd like to point out that this is just a few letters away from the canon name Cherryfall. I love the prefix Berry, but this is honestly too close to Cherryfall for me not to point it out :( -fall, I've seen, is a bit overused. This name isn't the most original, but hey, it is cute :3

Gender:tom

Ok

Appearance: fluffy silver tabby tom with yellow-green eyes

I like this. Silver tabbies are pretty overused, but they're usually she-cats. It's good to see some silver toms :) I love yellow-green eyes, they're pretty underused. I'd just suggest a more unique thing, something simple like white patches.

Clan:Riverclan

Okay

Rank: senior warrior

Thanks for specifying the type of warrior

Personality:curious, mischiefious,can get lonely sometimes,doesn't enjoy being with other clan warriors

Alright!! There are good and bad traits here, good good. Mischievous is my fav, most people don't really include that. Why doesn't he like being around others, and then he gets lonely? That's a bit funny lol. Overall this is good. good job

Back story: As a kit Berryfall enjoy playing with his littermate and getting trouble, he had a normal apprenticeship hood,as a warrior he journeyed beyond clan territories to find his own destiny,he ended up losi g his sister and ventured back to the tribe and soon cane back to his clan and lived a normal life

I am a bit confused by this. He just.. Decided to leave the Clans? Why? I mean, why didn't he think that his destiny was with the clans? And by losing his sister do you mean that she died? Did she leave with him, or was she still with the Clans? If she was with the Clans, how did he know that she died.. If she did die?

This isn't very detailed..

Mate:none

Ok

.-*OVERALL*-.

6/10. I'm just confused by his backstory tbh. His name isn't very original and it's a bit too close to Cherryfall. His appearance could be more detailed. His personality is good, tho :3