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Name:  Furystrike

I like this name. It works for a NightWing and I've never seen it before, so it's original.

Gender: Male

Ok

Tribe: Nightwing

I used to not like NightWings but I'm starting to like them a bit more now

Rank: Cizten

I'm assuming this is meant to say citizen...?

Residence: Rainforest with the Nightwings

Okay good

Appearance: Furystrike is mostly black,however his underscales are a dark grey,and his wings have a faint purple tinge. He has gold eyes,and misty grey horns and spikes. His tail is a bit shorter then most Nightwings.

This is good, it fits his Tribe and it's pretty descriptive. It's not the most original appearance, but it's not boring or overused.

Personaltiy: Furystrike seems grumpy and mean on the outside,but on the inside he's a bit Loney. Furystrike is serious,
Angered Easley and usually very unhappy. However he dose care for his sister,his crush and his mother.

This is alright. I've seen this personality a lot, I wouldn't say overused but maybe... unoriginal? I guess I like it. You could give him a few more good traits, maybe. He sounds quite miserable.

Family: Battleclaw(Mother,Nightwing),Unnamed Father(Nightwing),Prophecy(Sister,Nightwing),Void(Crush,Nightwimg)

Okay :3 I like Prophecy's name

Backstory: Furystrike grew up with his mother in the night kingdom with his older sister Prophecy. Furystrike wasn't suppose to survive long after birth because of his mothers poor condition when she had his egg. He however survived,but got sick more easily then other Nightwings. He never knew his father since his father ran away when his egg was laid. When the Nightwings left to the rainforest after their home was destroyed,he was one of the Nightwings who disagreed with Glory leading the Nightwings,but after he saw his crush,Void,agree to let Queen Glory rule,he agreed to(Plus his mother and sister wanted Glory to lead them)

Hmm. This isn't bad, but it's not particularly exciting or interesting to read about? Idk, it seems that he lived a pretty normal life, which is okay, but it doesn't sound super interesting to read about.

Other: He wished to become a guard for the Rainwings in the prison on the Nightwing volcano before it was destroyed

I like this bit :3

Overall
I'll give Furystrike a 6/10. I think you could add some more to his backstory to make it more interesting, and add some more to his appearance and personality that can make him kind of.. stand out? You could make him more original, imo.